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Volkswagen : Bus Vanagon SW 1975 Volkwagen Bus ** Good for restoring
 Volkswagen : Bus Vanagon SW 1975 Volkwagen Bus ** Good for restoring
$3,000.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 19h 12m
Jeep : Wrangler 2001 SPORT 4.0L Silver
 Jeep : Wrangler 2001 SPORT 4.0L Silver
$7,200.00
$9,450.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Porsche : Cayenne 2004 S 4.5L AUTO Silver
 Porsche : Cayenne 2004 S 4.5L AUTO Silver
$15,700.00
$17,800.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Lexus 2004 BASE 3.3L AUTO Breakwater Blue Metallic
 Lexus 2004 BASE 3.3L AUTO Breakwater Blue Metallic
$12,800.00
$14,400.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Ford : Mustang 2006 2DR CPE 4.0L
 Ford : Mustang 2006 2DR CPE 4.0L
$7,400.00
$9,150.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Mazda : MX-5 Miata 1999 1 1.8L Brilliant Black
 Mazda : MX-5 Miata 1999 1 1.8L Brilliant Black
$4,300.00
$5,650.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Honda : Prelude 1995 S 2.2L Blue
 Honda : Prelude 1995 S 2.2L Blue
$2,600.00
$3,350.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Ford : Ranger 2004 REG CAB 4X2 2.3L AUTO White
 Ford : Ranger 2004 REG CAB 4X2 2.3L AUTO White
$4,400.00
$5,550.00
Time Left: 1d 1h 4m
Nissan : 300ZX GLL 1985 Nissan 300ZX BLACK TURBO Z VERY ORIGINAL SURVIVOR FULLY LOADED LIKE AE Z31
 Nissan : 300ZX GLL 1985 Nissan 300ZX BLACK TURBO Z VERY ORIGINAL SURVIVOR FULLY LOADED LIKE AE Z31
$1,725.00
$5,500.00
Time Left: 1d 3h 54m
Jeep : Grand Cherokee Limited Fresh 4.7 engine rebuild * axle & transmission upgrade * 4" lift * tuned exhaust
 Jeep : Grand Cherokee Limited Fresh 4.7 engine rebuild * axle & transmission upgrade * 4" lift * tuned exhaust
$9,975.00
Time Left: 1d 14h 27m
Ford : Escape 2002 ford escape 4x4 xlt
 Ford : Escape 2002 ford escape 4x4 xlt
$2,650.00 (12 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 15h 6m
Acura : TL We Finance Used Acura TL Custom Transformers Car Import Automatic 4dr Sedan Auto Cars NAV
 Acura : TL We Finance Used Acura TL Custom Transformers Car Import Automatic 4dr Sedan Auto Cars NAV
$4,050.00 (15 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 16h 30m
BMW : M3 1998 BMW M3 Convetible
 BMW : M3 1998 BMW M3 Convetible
$5,075.00 (12 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 18h 2m
Dodge : Dart DEMON 1971 71 Dodge Dart Sport Demon 340 4 speed NICE
 Dodge : Dart DEMON 1971 71 Dodge Dart Sport Demon 340 4 speed NICE
$17,900.00 (15 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 51m
Cadillac : DeVille 2002 CADILLAC DEVILLE WHITE DIAMOND
 Cadillac : DeVille 2002 CADILLAC DEVILLE WHITE DIAMOND
$3,950.00
$6,900.00
Time Left: 2d 2h 19m
Chrysler : Sebring Limited 2004 Chrysler Sebring Limited Convertible With 70, 310 Miles
 Chrysler : Sebring Limited 2004 Chrysler Sebring Limited Convertible With 70, 310 Miles
$5,400.00
$5,750.00
Time Left: 2d 13h 42m
Ford : F-250 Diesel Used Ford F 250 6 Speed Manual Powerstroke Turbo Lariat 4x4 Pickup Trucks 4wd V8
 Ford : F-250 Diesel Used Ford F 250 6 Speed Manual Powerstroke Turbo Lariat 4x4 Pickup Trucks 4wd V8
$12,600.00 (25 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 16h 53m
Dodge : Ram 3500 Diesel Used Dodge Ram 2500 Cummins Turbo 4x4 Pickup Truck 4wd Trucks We Finance 4dr
 Dodge : Ram 3500 Diesel Used Dodge Ram 2500 Cummins Turbo 4x4 Pickup Truck 4wd Trucks We Finance 4dr
$13,200.00 (16 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 17h 6m
Dodge : Ram 1500 SLT LARAMI 1996 DODGE RAM 1500 SLT LARAMI - BLUE 130.000 MILLES
 Dodge : Ram 1500 SLT LARAMI 1996 DODGE RAM 1500 SLT LARAMI - BLUE 130.000 MILLES
$4,999.00
Time Left: 2d 19h 8m
Toyota : Prius We Finance Used Toyota Prius Hybrid Autos Electric Cars 4dr Sedan Automatic Low Reserve
 Toyota : Prius We Finance Used Toyota Prius Hybrid Autos Electric Cars 4dr Sedan Automatic Low Reserve
$9,400.00 (14 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 19h 59m
Land Rover : Discovery 2004 LAND ROVER DISCOVERY 4.6 V-8 MOTOR NO RESERVE AUCTION
 Land Rover : Discovery 2004 LAND ROVER DISCOVERY 4.6 V-8 MOTOR NO RESERVE AUCTION
$2,934.00 (9 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 20h 10m
Ford : F-350 Diesel Used Ford F350 Powerstroke Turbo Dually Regualr Cab 4x2 Pickup Trucks 2wd Truck
 Ford : F-350 Diesel Used Ford F350 Powerstroke Turbo Dually Regualr Cab 4x2 Pickup Trucks 2wd Truck
$7,301.00 (8 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 20h 44m
GMC : Sierra 1500 2005 GMC Sierra 1500 4.3L V6 A C CLEAN CARFAX
 GMC : Sierra 1500 2005 GMC Sierra 1500 4.3L V6 A C CLEAN CARFAX
$2,025.00
$6,299.00
Time Left: 2d 20h 47m
Jeep : Wrangler We Finance Used Jeep Wrangler Rubicon Lifted Jeeps 4wd Sport Utility 4x4 SUV V6Low Reserve
 Jeep : Wrangler We Finance Used Jeep Wrangler Rubicon Lifted Jeeps 4wd Sport Utility 4x4 SUV V6Low Reserve
$8,301.00 (14 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 21h 38m
Dodge : Challenger SRT8 2011 DODGE CHALLENGER SRT8 "392" INAUGURAL EDITION
 Dodge : Challenger SRT8 2011 DODGE CHALLENGER SRT8 "392" INAUGURAL EDITION
$34,100.00
$47,500.00
Time Left: 2d 22h 34m
Nissan : Titan We Finance Used Nissan Titan Crew Cab 4x4 Pickup Trucks Import Automatic 4wd Truck V8 Autos
 Nissan : Titan We Finance Used Nissan Titan Crew Cab 4x4 Pickup Trucks Import Automatic 4wd Truck V8 Autos
$10,100.00 (28 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 22h 37m
Dodge : Ram 1500 We Finance Lifted Dodge Ram 1500 Laramie SLT 4x4 Monster Trucks 4wd Pickup Truck V8 Autos
 Dodge : Ram 1500 We Finance Lifted Dodge Ram 1500 Laramie SLT 4x4 Monster Trucks 4wd Pickup Truck V8 Autos
$5,100.00 (11 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 22h 43m
Dodge : Ram Van We Finance Used Dodge Ram 1500 Low Top Conversion Van Caravan Minivans Low Reserve V8
 Dodge : Ram Van We Finance Used Dodge Ram 1500 Low Top Conversion Van Caravan Minivans Low Reserve V8
$1,225.00 (18 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 22h 59m
Nissan : 240SX 1996 NISSAN 240SX STOCK NO MODIFICATIONS (NO RESERVE!!!)
 Nissan : 240SX 1996 NISSAN 240SX STOCK NO MODIFICATIONS (NO RESERVE!!!)
$1,725.00 (2 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 1h 50m
Chevrolet : Corvette Z06 Z06 L@@k Z06 NAVIGATION SYSTEM 4 NEW TIRES JUST TRADED IN BUY IT WHOLESALE NOW WONT LAST!
 Chevrolet : Corvette Z06 Z06 L@@k Z06 NAVIGATION SYSTEM 4 NEW TIRES JUST TRADED IN BUY IT WHOLESALE NOW WONT LAST!
$48,500.00
$49,500.00
Time Left: 3d 3h 10m
Ford : F-250 4X4 DIESEL!! 4X4 POWERSTROKE DIESEL LARIAT LEATHER CREW CAB FX4 BUY IT WHOLESALE NOW L@@k!!!!
 Ford : F-250 4X4 DIESEL!! 4X4 POWERSTROKE DIESEL LARIAT LEATHER CREW CAB FX4 BUY IT WHOLESALE NOW L@@k!!!!
$13,655.00
$20,900.00
Time Left: 3d 3h 25m
Chrysler : PT Cruiser Low miles, Non-Smoker, 2007 PT Cruiser Touring, Excellent Shape, Price Below KBB
 Chrysler : PT Cruiser Low miles, Non-Smoker, 2007 PT Cruiser Touring, Excellent Shape, Price Below KBB
$6,700.00 (17 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 12h 55m
Toyota : Camry We Finance Used Toyota Camry Solara Coupe Automatic Coupes 2dr Import Low Reserve Roof
 Toyota : Camry We Finance Used Toyota Camry Solara Coupe Automatic Coupes 2dr Import Low Reserve Roof
$4,550.00 (11 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 18h 13m
Toyota : Camry We Finance Used Toyota Camry Solara Convertible Coupe Automatic Import Coupes Low Reserve
 Toyota : Camry We Finance Used Toyota Camry Solara Convertible Coupe Automatic Import Coupes Low Reserve
$7,675.00 (16 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 18h 23m
Ferrari : 360 360 Modena 2000 Ferrari 360 Modena SIX-Speed Manual, Grigo Blue ONLY 17.161 miles
 Ferrari : 360 360 Modena 2000 Ferrari 360 Modena SIX-Speed Manual, Grigo Blue ONLY 17.161 miles
$66,000.00
$69,900.00
Time Left: 3d 19h 48m
Porsche : Panamera s 2010 Porsche Panamera S , Black on Grey- Sport Crono-20k miles, Mint!
 Porsche : Panamera s 2010 Porsche Panamera S , Black on Grey- Sport Crono-20k miles, Mint!
$85,000.00 (1 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 19h 56m
Aston Martin : DB9 Volante 06 ASTON MARTIN DB9 VOLANTE, 32k miles.Paddle shift, Sport Exhaust! Ansanti wheels
 Aston Martin : DB9 Volante 06 ASTON MARTIN DB9 VOLANTE, 32k miles.Paddle shift, Sport Exhaust! Ansanti wheels
$74,000.00
$75,600.00
Time Left: 3d 19h 58m
Suzuki : XL7 We Finance Used Suzuki XL 7 Sport Utility 4x2 Import Automatic SUV 2wd 4dr FWD Low Reserve
 Suzuki : XL7 We Finance Used Suzuki XL 7 Sport Utility 4x2 Import Automatic SUV 2wd 4dr FWD Low Reserve
$2,025.00 (12 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 20h 4m
Ford : F-250 We Finance Used Ford F 250 Extra Cab Powerstroke Turbo Diesel 4x4 Pickup Trucks 4wd Truck
 Ford : F-250 We Finance Used Ford F 250 Extra Cab Powerstroke Turbo Diesel 4x4 Pickup Trucks 4wd Truck
$6,350.00 (14 Bids)
Time Left: 3d 20h 46m
Oldsmobile : Silhouette 1996 OLDSMOBILE SILHOUETTE FOR REPAIR NO RESERVE!!!
 Oldsmobile : Silhouette 1996 OLDSMOBILE SILHOUETTE FOR REPAIR NO RESERVE!!!
$400.00 (1 Bids)
Time Left: 4d 2h 15m

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Can a person be evicted from a home they own in Lexington, North Carolina?
Question:
My sister is a widow, a Canadian citizen but a permanent resident of the USA. Before his death, her husband had owned half the house, her father-in-law had owned the other half but fearing he might one day have to go into a nursing home, he made her his heir and did a quick deed, signing his half of the house over to her. She now owns the house but her father-in-law has a legal right to live in the house for as long as he lives. He has tried to get her to sign the entire ownership over to him and has just presented her with a notice to evict (handwritten, not an eviction notice). Can he do this? She has minimal income (Canadian disability) and can not afford a lawyer. She has no means of transportation (she signed her car over to him but he won't let her ride in it) so she can't get to the doctor, grocery shop, etc. He is making life difficult for her, has disconnected the internet, phone, given away furniture (no paperwork on who owns the furniture) and has threatened her and her dog. He wants her to sign the house back over to him. He just gave her notice to vacate. Can he force her out of the house she owns? Her father-in-law has a new girlfriend who wants the house and who has been putting ideas into his head. My sister is on Canadian disability pension, she's a permanent US resident. I live in Canada and she in North Carolina, USA. Her FIL wanted the car and she couldn't afford the insurance after her husband died so she signed it over to him. She got a cell phone but can't afford to buy a clunker or the insurance. She has no wood for the furnace, no way to get groceries unless a church member drives her. Her FIL was afraid that he or his late wife would have to go into a nursing home and loose the house. It was his idea, he took her to HIS lawyer. She has in irrevocable trust in which the house goes to her grandson. He (the FIL) made it difficult for the grandson to live there and he came back to Canada. She really needs help. He has a right to live in the house for as long as he lives because that's the way the quick deed was drawn up. He took my sister to his lawyer because he initiated all this, fearing he or his late wife would have to go into a nursing home. My sister cared for his invalid wife (her mother-in-law) until her death. My sister has no money except for a Canadian disability pension. She can not sell the house due to the irrevocable trust she set up in her grandson's name. Can he (the father-in-law) force her to leave? Her husband died about three years ago and her mother-in-law died about 1 1/2 years ago. Her father-in-law has additional property (many, many acres) with a house on it which he farms. He lives in my sister's house which she owns 100% of because he had that stipulation put into the quick deed he drew up. My sister has only a disability pension to live on, no medical coverage and no wood to heat the house. She really and truly needs help and I'm so far away (in Canada). I looked up on the internet and found a North Carolina Legal Aid place. I faxed them in brief intro telling them she would phone them in the morning. She tried over 20 times cut could not get through. Does her father-in-law honestly think he can evict her from her own house?

Answer:
There's more to this story than you're telling us. How and why does he have a "legal right to live in the house"? Does that right preclude her from selling the house she owns? I would suggest that she SELL the house to him at fair market value and come move in with you. Better yet, she should sell the house to a third party and let them evict the father-in-law. If I was an annoying father-in-law, I wouldn't do anything to piss off my heir. He runs the risk of not waking up one morning.

Public showers in North Carolina?
Question:
I'm currently living out of my car and need to find an area to shower, the closer to Winston or Lexington the better. I don't mind paying a gym membership fee.

Answer:
Sorry you're in this situation. Many truck stops have showers for the truckers. Talk to the attendents and ask if there is a private place that you can get cleaned up. It's usually a few dollars, but not as much as getting a room for the night. Also, you might check into the local YMCA or YWCA. They often have much less expensive membership fees than gyms and they will likely be sensitive to your situation. Finally, there are some shelters around. I don't know about Winston and Lexington, but I know that there are places in Durham, Chapel Hill, and Hillsborough that you could check out. Good luck!

How would a traffic-free urban playground, go over in Chicago?
Question:
NYC Experiments With Traffic-Free Urban Playground NEW YORK - In Paris, they call it La Plage, or the beach. And in Bogota, Colombia, it's Ciclovia, or bikeway. For six hours Saturday in New York, it was called Summer Streets: Nearly seven miles of Manhattan that were stripped of traffic, creating a weekend playground for bikers, walkers and loungers. "Bellissimo!" declared Antonio de Lucia, a tourist from Caserta, Italy, who read about the event and decided to walk about three miles from his Chinatown hotel to a friend's Times Square restaurant — with more than 90 pounds of luggage. An hour into his hike, he was smiling as he sauntered up a stretch of Park Avenue awash in cyclists, pedestrians and in-line skaters. One man on a bicycle swooped down a sloped section of the avenue yelling "whee!" at full voice. "It's a moment of truth for this city. People are participating — New Yorkers are united with their city," said de Lucia, a 29-year-old business consultant. Bike-loving celebrities Lance Armstrong and David Byrne are helping Mayor Michael Bloomberg launch the experiment. It emulates similar initiatives in cities around the world in aiming to create a livable, ecologically gentle urban environment. The 6.9-mile, car-free route started at the Brooklyn Bridge and ended to the north at East 72nd Street, with links to Central Park and other open spaces. It included stretches of Park and Lexington avenues and is set to be repeated for the next two Saturdays, starting at 7 a.m. The idea is simple, in the words of the city's official Web site: "Play. Run. Walk. Bike. Breathe." Fitness, dance and yoga classes were offered at a central stage along the route, with additional exercise and health activities hosted by community groups at certain cross streets. Bike rental facilities were available along the route, including learn-to-ride lessons for adults. http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20080809/ap_on_re_us/summer _streets;_ylt=Alhg9uqWOMQDAD.DzeBFu80DW7oF

Answer:
We have two already...Millennium Park and Lincoln Park. Bikes can be rented nearby. Ride along the lake and enjoy the sights and weather. Check the following sites: http://www.millenniumpark.org/ http://www.lpzoo.org/ http://www.trustedtours.com/store/Chicago-Day-Bike-Rentals-C2 67.aspx

Is this a good first chapter? 10 PTS BEST ANSWER!?
Question:
Okay, so after LOTS of re-thinking and editing, I've finally come up with a [hopefully] good story :] Okay well my story idea is that a girl, named Chloe, Is driving with her mom and they crash, her mom dies, and she finds out that her dead father is actually alive, and since he is her only other living relative, she is forced to go live with him. Problem is, her father lives on a giant 3 day eventing barn in Lexington, and after she was thrown off a horse into a wall, she is petrified of them. She learns to trust them again. She then starts to struggle with her father and step-mother, and when her horse escapes in a giant storm, she is determined to find her. “Oh, no! Allison, I need to go, mom will be so pissed if I don’t leave now!” I told my best friend, Allison Fallows, looking at my watch. She tucked a piece of strawberry blonde hair behind her ear. She looked at me with her beautiful blue eyes. “Okay, well, today was fun. See ya, Chloe.” She gave me a little wave. I smiled and put on my flip-flops and walked away from the pond, it had been our favourite spot ever since the fifth grade, three years ago, we stumble upon this beautiful pond, and spent nearly every minute we could here. I ran through the trees that surrounded it and jumped over a stream I came to a gravel road and headed north, I turned right and went up my driveway. “CHLOE! Where have you BEEN? I told you to get home at four exactly!” My mother bellowed out the open kitchen window. I looked at my purple rubber wristwatch, 4:10, it read and I shook my head. My mother and I were going to a meeting for her work, and we couldn’t be a second late, or so she said. “Sorry.” I mumbled and climbed up the stone steps to our five year old Cape Cod house. My mom only got angry if we were late, she was usually pretty relaxed. I wondered how she managed, after my father died. “Please, change your clothes, and then we’ll get going.” She told me as I made my way up our oak stairs. I went into my heather coloured room and stared out the window, just moments before, the hot June sun had been burning me up, but now black storm clouds were blowing south to us. It wasn’t that uncommon here, in Carrying Place, to have a giant storm, but we only got a few in the summer. I replaced my shorts with light washed skinny jeans and put on a pink strapless top on under a cream coloured cardigan. I ran a comb through my silky light blonde hair and went back downstairs. I slipped on a pair of silver open back flats. I went outside and locked the door behind me. My mother was waiting in the car putting lipstick on her pale lips. I dodged light raindrops and opened the passenger side door of our ford focus and slid into the seat next to my mum. Mom shook her head, “Can you be any slower?” She teased. I rolled my eyes and laughed. The only reason I had to come with her today was because she was dropping me off at my friend’s house after the meeting. My mom started the car and the rain fell in heavy, giant drops on the windshield. “So what were you are Ali up to today?” Mom asked, making casual conversation. “Just talking, I guess” I answered. “About what?” She took her eyes off the road and looked at me. “Well,” I looked up, and noticed we drifted into the lane next to us. “Mom! Look out!” I screamed and tried not to panic, the oncoming car braked and swerved. Mom turned the car to the left, right towards a giant clump of spruce trees. Time seemed to slow, I saw the terror in her blue eyes, then it everything happened so fast, the smell of burnt wood filled my nose, I was wretched forward in my seat, a terrible crunching noise almost made my puke, it felt as if I was falling into an unforgettable darkness, down, down, into a sucking whole of fear, and everything went black. How can I fix it? How can I make it better? Sorry if it ends up being a block of text, I tried to fix it but yahoo is gay. 10 pts best answer :) Thx in advance Kat xx

Answer:
I'm going to treat you like any major editor would. I think you have an AMAZING story going here. I love your plot and story so far! However, here's some criticism that might help. Your characters seem kind of the same. The dialogue is predictable. You need to make each character a bit more original, even if they won't be seen much in the book. Make the reader know more about them by just reading one small passage. Ex. “Allison, I really need to go! My mom will be so pissed if I don’t leave now!” I told my best friend, Allison Fallows, looking at my watch. She tucked a piece of strawberry blonde hair behind her ear, looking at me with her beautiful blue eyes. "Are you sure? My brother said that-" Alison was always persistent, even when she was the sweetest girl ever. "I'm sure," I said, cutting her off. "Alright. Well, today was fun. I'll see you later, kay'?" "Yep," I gave her a small wave and walked off. ---Of course, I don't know what the situation is, but you should always give more then the reader wants, even if it's just a smudge more. And your imagery is great! I could see the entire scene in my head by the way you described it. But you also overuse the word 'I' at the beginning of the sentence. Ex. Just swap the noun and I. "Trying not to panic, I screamed as the oncoming car braked and swerved." See? Trust me, I've had all the same issues and I mean absolutely no offense when I say this stuff. I'm just trying to help :) I hope everything turns out Ok! xxElisa

Does My Dad Sell Marijuana?
Question:
He told me and my siblings that he worked at a used car dealership that he Never showed us. And he gets up at odd hours to go out and "do his job". You see me and my siblings are the original from his first wife, he divorced our mom and we moved to Indiana where we stayed for over a decade(away from North Carolina) and he suddenly gained custody of us in the summer of 09'. He then had us with his Thai wife (our stepmother) and half brother who is 3 and spoiled and has a TV and all the things we never had when we were that young and he kicked us out after we were around that age. Anyway we went to North Carolina with them and we only stayed there for 3 months until he sent us all to live with random relatives and fled to Thailand with his new Thai Wife named Natcha from Lexington NC where we were staying to Thailand Fleeing his responsibilities. What a douche.

Answer:
Awh, don't even worry about it socky! He's not worth it! Does he treat you & your siblings badly or just like distant? Maybe call child line 0800 1111 I'm sure they will be fab about helping u!

Is this a good story idea/first chapter?
Question:
Okay, so after LOTS of re-thinking and editing, I've finally come up with a [hopefully] good story :] Okay well my story idea is that a girl, named Chloe, Is driving with her mom and they crash, her mom dies, and she finds out that her dead father is actually alive, and since he is her only other living relative, she is forced to go live with him. Problem is, her father lives on a giant 3 day eventing barn in Lexington, and after she was thrown off a horse into a wall, she is petrified of them. She learns to trust them again. She then starts to struggle with her father and step-mother, and when her horse escapes in a giant storm, she is determined to find her. “Oh, no! Allison, I need to go, mom will be so pissed if I don’t leave now!” I told my best friend, Allison Fallows, looking at my watch. She tucked a piece of strawberry blonde hair behind her ear. She looked at me with her beautiful blue eyes. “Okay, well, today was fun. See ya, Chloe.” She gave me a little wave. I smiled and put on my flip-flops and walked away from the pond, it had been our favourite spot ever since the fifth grade, three years ago, we stumble upon this beautiful pond, and spent nearly every minute we could here. I ran through the trees that surrounded it and jumped over a stream I came to a gravel road and headed north, I turned right and went up my driveway. “CHLOE! Where have you BEEN? I told you to get home at four exactly!” My mother bellowed out the open kitchen window. I looked at my purple rubber wristwatch, 4:10, it read and I shook my head. My mother and I were going to a meeting for her work, and we couldn’t be a second late, or so she said. “Sorry.” I mumbled and climbed up the stone steps to our five year old Cape Cod house. My mom only got angry if we were late, she was usually pretty relaxed. I wondered how she managed, after my father died. “Please, change your clothes, and then we’ll get going.” She told me as I made my way up our oak stairs. I went into my heather coloured room and stared out the window, just moments before, the hot June sun had been burning me up, but now black storm clouds were blowing south to us. It wasn’t that uncommon here, in Carrying Place, to have a giant storm, but we only got a few in the summer. I replaced my shorts with light washed skinny jeans and put on a pink strapless top on under a cream coloured cardigan. I ran a comb through my silky light blonde hair and went back downstairs. I slipped on a pair of silver open back flats. I went outside and locked the door behind me. My mother was waiting in the car putting lipstick on her pale lips. I dodged light raindrops and opened the passenger side door of our ford focus and slid into the seat next to my mum. Mom shook her head, “Can you be any slower?” She teased. I rolled my eyes and laughed. The only reason I had to come with her today was because she was dropping me off at my friend’s house after the meeting. My mom started the car and the rain fell in heavy, giant drops on the windshield. “So what were you are Ali up to today?” Mom asked, making casual conversation. “Just talking, I guess” I answered. “About what?” She took her eyes off the road and looked at me. “Well,” I looked up, and noticed we drifted into the lane next to us. “Mom! Look out!” I screamed and tried not to panic, the oncoming car braked and swerved. Mom turned the car to the left, right towards a giant clump of spruce trees. Time seemed to slow, I saw the terror in her blue eyes, then it everything happened so fast, the smell of burnt wood filled my nose, I was wretched forward in my seat, a terrible crunching noise almost made my puke, it felt as if I was falling into an unforgettable darkness, down, down, into a sucking whole of fear, and everything went black. 10 pts best answer, and please tell me how I can fi it, or make it better. Thanks in advance. Kat xx I am only 12, just so you know, but i have been writing since I was 7 :) Sorry I'll repost this, I DO KNOW HOW TO USE PARAGRAPHS, stupid yahoo totally ignores me when I paste something :/

Answer:
It's a good story that I would like to red. Although, some of the words you use were not used the correct way. Such as , "So what were your are Ali up to today?" It should say and, but this might be a mistype. Also, we don't know enough information about each character, and aren't given enough time to connect with the mother. Use paragraphs too. If you could fix these mistakes it would be very good for a 12 year old.