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Jeep : Renegade 2005 Jeep Liberty Renegade
 Jeep : Renegade 2005 Jeep Liberty Renegade
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Lexus : GX470 2004 Lexus GX470 NAV Backup Cam 20' Chrome Rear DVD XM Bluetooth iPod Warranty
 Lexus : GX470 2004 Lexus GX470 NAV Backup Cam 20' Chrome Rear DVD XM Bluetooth iPod Warranty
$19,834.00
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Ford : Excursion 2002 Ford Excursion
 Ford : Excursion 2002 Ford Excursion
$4,049.99 (12 Bids)
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Scion : xB Release Series 5.0 Special edition
 Scion : xB Release Series 5.0 Special edition
$6,301.00
$12,995.00
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Oldsmobile : Alero Olds Alero - 4 Dr - 4 Cyl - One Owner
 Oldsmobile : Alero Olds Alero - 4 Dr - 4 Cyl - One Owner
$650.00
$1,850.00
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Pontiac : GTO GTO 1967 Pontiac Real GTO original paint Matching 400 H.O. 4-speed Red Fender Liner
 Pontiac : GTO GTO 1967 Pontiac Real GTO original paint Matching 400 H.O. 4-speed Red Fender Liner
$7,100.00 (9 Bids)
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Toyota : Camry 02 XLE 4Cyl 02 XLE FANTASTIC GORGEOUS COND - LOADED MOON ROOF- LOW RES GREAT VALUE RUNS 100%
 Toyota : Camry 02 XLE 4Cyl 02 XLE FANTASTIC GORGEOUS COND - LOADED MOON ROOF- LOW RES GREAT VALUE RUNS 100%
$4,550.00 (19 Bids)
Time Left: 2h 50m
Kia : Sportage LX 2005 Kia Sportage LX
 Kia : Sportage LX 2005 Kia Sportage LX
$5,200.00
$5,999.00
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Cadillac : Escalade Ext Rare EXT! Back up cam! Dvd! Navigation! Parktronic! Moon! 20" Enkei's with Toyos
 Cadillac : Escalade Ext Rare EXT! Back up cam! Dvd! Navigation! Parktronic! Moon! 20" Enkei's with Toyos
$29,400.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 3h 41m
Chrysler : Sebring Touring 2008 CHRYSLER SEBRING CONVERTIBLE TOURING WHITE LOADED CLEAN
 Chrysler : Sebring Touring 2008 CHRYSLER SEBRING CONVERTIBLE TOURING WHITE LOADED CLEAN
$6,110.00
$8,995.00
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Nissan : 350Z Touring 2003 NISSAN 350Z TOURING DAYTONA BLUE SUPER CLEAN SHARP
 Nissan : 350Z Touring 2003 NISSAN 350Z TOURING DAYTONA BLUE SUPER CLEAN SHARP
$8,100.00
$10,495.00
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Audi : A4 2dr Cabriole 2dr Cabriole Coupe
 Audi : A4 2dr Cabriole 2dr Cabriole Coupe
$29,969.00
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BMW : 3-Series Clean BMW 3-Series 325XI All Wheel Drive Sedan Dk Blue 134k Mileage Long Island NY
 BMW : 3-Series Clean BMW 3-Series 325XI All Wheel Drive Sedan Dk Blue 134k Mileage Long Island NY
$3,383.00 (6 Bids)
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Land Rover : Defender 2DR STATION 1997 LAND ROVER DEFENDER 90 STATION WAGON "LOW MILES, STUNNING!!!"
 Land Rover : Defender 2DR STATION 1997 LAND ROVER DEFENDER 90 STATION WAGON "LOW MILES, STUNNING!!!"
$36,100.00 (21 Bids)
Time Left: 14h 51m
Austin Healey 3000 BJ7 1963 AUSTIN HEALEY 3000 MKII BJ7 "RESTORED, STUNNING
 Austin Healey 3000 BJ7 1963 AUSTIN HEALEY 3000 MKII BJ7 "RESTORED, STUNNING
$37,950.00 (12 Bids)
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Chevrolet : Uplander LT EXT AWD 2005 Chevy Uplander LT Extended AWD All Wheel Drive - seats 7 - DVD + tow pkg
 Chevrolet : Uplander LT EXT AWD 2005 Chevy Uplander LT Extended AWD All Wheel Drive - seats 7 - DVD + tow pkg
$4,999.00 (14 Bids)
Time Left: 15h 39m
Jeep : Wrangler 4X4 2dr Spor 4X4 2dr Spor SUV
 Jeep : Wrangler 4X4 2dr Spor 4X4 2dr Spor SUV
$20,969.00
Time Left: 16h 10m
Land Rover : LR3 4X4 4dr SE 4X4 4dr SE SUV
 Land Rover : LR3 4X4 4dr SE 4X4 4dr SE SUV
$26,969.00
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Subaru : Legacy 4dr Sdn H4 A 4dr Sdn H4 A
 Subaru : Legacy 4dr Sdn H4 A 4dr Sdn H4 A
$19,969.00
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Subaru : Outback 4dr Wgn H6 A 4dr Wgn H6 A LIMITED
 Subaru : Outback 4dr Wgn H6 A 4dr Wgn H6 A LIMITED
$28,969.00
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Audi : A5 2dr Cpe Auto 2dr Cpe Auto Coupe
 Audi : A5 2dr Cpe Auto 2dr Cpe Auto Coupe
$36,969.00
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BMW : 5-Series 4dr Sdn 535i 4dr Sdn 535i
 BMW : 5-Series 4dr Sdn 535i 4dr Sdn 535i
$33,969.00
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Chevrolet : Corvette 2DR COUPE HA 1990 CALLAWAY ZR-1 "SUPERNATURAL LT-5, 1 OF 11"
 Chevrolet : Corvette 2DR COUPE HA 1990 CALLAWAY ZR-1 "SUPERNATURAL LT-5, 1 OF 11"
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Cadillac : DeVille 1969 Cadillac Deville Convertible "Shalimar Gold"
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BMW : 6-Series I 09 BMW 650I CONVERTIBLE, SPORT PKG, 19" WHEELS, NAVIGATION
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$53,995.00
Time Left: 17h 14m
BMW : 1-Series I 08 BMW 128 CONVERTIBLE, 6 SPEED, SPORT PKG
 BMW : 1-Series I 08 BMW 128 CONVERTIBLE, 6 SPEED, SPORT PKG
$28,495.00
Time Left: 17h 19m
Mercedes-Benz : 300-Series 300 CD 1982 CD 300 Turbo Diesel Great Condition
 Mercedes-Benz : 300-Series 300 CD 1982 CD 300 Turbo Diesel Great Condition
$6,900.00
Time Left: 17h 27m
Honda : S2000 2006 HONDA S2000
 Honda : S2000 2006 HONDA S2000
$16,000.00
$18,550.00
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Infiniti : G SPORT G37 08 INFINITI G37 S COUPE SPORT 6 SPEED, NAVIGATION, 19" WHEELS
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$28,695.00
Time Left: 17h 34m
Hummer : H3 4WD 4DR SUV This beautiful 2009 Hummer H3 is LIKE NEW ! Call 631-654-5660 for more info now
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$10,400.00 (13 Bids)
Time Left: 17h 46m
Mitsubishi : Eclipse GS Sport Mint Like New inEvery Way only 6085 Miles !! Call 631-654-5660 for more info
 Mitsubishi : Eclipse GS Sport Mint Like New inEvery Way only 6085 Miles !! Call 631-654-5660 for more info
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Alfa Romeo : Spider Veloce 1985 ALFA ROMEO SPIDER, CUSTOM INTERIOR
 Alfa Romeo : Spider Veloce 1985 ALFA ROMEO SPIDER, CUSTOM INTERIOR
$2,550.00 (10 Bids)
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Buick PHAETON 1940 BUICK SERIES 80 PHAETON "SHIRLEY TEMPLE CAR!!!"
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$79,900.00
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Ford : Thunderbird 1957 Ford Thunderbird Convertible (Restored)
 Ford : Thunderbird 1957 Ford Thunderbird Convertible (Restored)
$19,050.00 (16 Bids)
Time Left: 18h 56m
Chrysler : Sebring Touring Black 2005 Chrysler Sebring Touring ONLY 50, 983 miles!
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$1,725.00
$4,100.00
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Acura : TL 4dr Sdn AT N 4dr Sdn AT N NAV CD 4-Wheel ABS A C Adjustable Steering Wheel Alarm AM FM Stereo
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Time Left: 19h 26m
Jeep : Wrangler yj loredo black, good condition straight 6 cylinder , hard top, runs great, many new parts
 Jeep : Wrangler yj loredo black, good condition straight 6 cylinder , hard top, runs great, many new parts
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Time Left: 19h 40m
Audi : A6 3.2L 2006 AUDI A6 3.2 QUATTRO AVANT WAGON, NAVIGATION, LOADED
 Audi : A6 3.2L 2006 AUDI A6 3.2 QUATTRO AVANT WAGON, NAVIGATION, LOADED
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Ford : Contour SVT 1998 Ford Contour SVT Champcar Indy Car Indycar Pace Car Only 1 EVER BUILT!!
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Audi : S4 2007 Audi S4 V8 Cabriolet
 Audi : S4 2007 Audi S4 V8 Cabriolet
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$44,000.00
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i need help with alot of questions! plz dont say things like ur too lazy and stuff. questions 5th Grade Competition Bergen County Academies Math Competition 2006 22 October 2006 1. To get ready for a math competition, Kevin buys a pencil for fifty cents, a ruler for one dollar, and graph paper for thirty dollars. How much money does Kevin spend? 2. If CNN is on channel 25 and YES is on channel 70, how many times does Michael have to hit the “channel up” button in order to switch from watching CNN to YES? 3. Brian likes to feed the ducks. The first day he uses 1 slice of bread. The second day he uses 2 slices of bread. The third day he uses 3 slices of bread. If this pattern continues, how many slices of bread will he use on the tenth day? 4. Chang is illegally cruising down Route 4 in his father’s car. There are numbered markers along the route, each spaced one mile apart, which indicate how far one has travelled. If Chang starts at the 94th mile marker and the police stop him at the 117th mile marker, how many miles did Chang travel? 5. 2 × 0 × 0 × 6 = 6. Mrs. Stone makes 20 telephone calls per day. How many telephone calls does she make in the month of January? 7. Calculate 10 − 9 + 8 − 7 + 6 − 5 + 4 − 3 + 2 − 1. 8. Arthur accidentally added 7 to a number instead of multiplying that number by 7 on a math problem. His answer was 11. What should he have gotten as an answer? 9. To be prepared, Yoonjoo wants to carry 10 pencils with her at all times during school. Every hour, she gives one pencil to a friend and loses one pencil. If school is 8 hours long, at least how many pencils must Yoonjoo bring to school to remain prepared? 10. James’s pet alligator has a body and a tail that together are 5 times as long as its head. From the tip of its nose to the tip of its tail the giant alligator is 300 meters long. How many meters long is its head? 11. Asena and Christine are playing a game. Asena asks Christine to pick a number. She then asks her to add 12 to that number, multiply her answer by 3, subtract 36 from her new answer, divide that answer by 6, and multiply this answer by 2. If Christine picks the number 10 in the beginning, what number does she have at the end? 12. Aaron knows he has somewhere between 100 and 110 baseball cards in his collection. If he counts his cards 2 at a time, he has 1 card left over. If he counts his cards 5 at a time, he has 2 left over. How many cards are in Aaron’s collection? 13. Express 11 5 in decimal form. 1 14. In Eddy’s sock drawer, there are two red socks, three blue socks, and two green socks. If Eddy takes socks out of the drawer one at a time and does not put them back, how many must he take out so that he can make at least one matching pair? 15. A military clock, instead of having the numbers 1 through 12, has the numbers 1 through 24 evenly spaced around the circular face. What is the number directly across from 19? 16. For a class trip, Mr. Holbrook hires 2 buses, which can each hold 50 students. However, 123 students signed up for the trip. If a car can hold up to 4 students, what is the minimum number of cars needed in addition to the two buses to ensure that every student has a ride? 17. Two numbers have a sum of 15 and a product of 36. What is the larger of the two numbers? 18. In a high school physical education class, 11 students know how to climb a tree. 6 of these students are male. There are 14 boys total in the class. 7 girls in the class do not know how to climb a tree. How many students are there in this class? 19. 20 + 40 + 60 + 80 = (1 + 2 + 3 + 4) × ? 20. Mike arrived at a party 27 minutes before 3 : 23 PM. What time was it 11 minutes after he arrived? 21. If Eugene counted to 600 by 6’s, starting with 6, how many numbers did he count that are less than 600? 22. A triangle has a base of length 5 inches and a height to that base of length 8 inches. What is the area, in square inches, of the triangle? 23. If a bird’s wings flap 64 times every second, then how many times do a bird’s wings flap in 10 minutes? 24. If a race began at 3 : 43 PM and ended at 5 : 57 PM the same day, the race was half over at what time? 25. Will is 11 years old, and his sister is 7 years old. What will be the sum of Will’s age and his sister’s age when Will is 26 years old? 26. Hannah goes to Boston Market to eat lunch. She picks a piece of chicken for her main meal, and must select a side dish and a drink. The possible side dishes are mashed potatos, corn, green beans, and cinnamon apples. The possible drinks are Coca Cola, Sprite, orange soda, iced tea, lemonade, and water. How many different meals can Hannah select? 27. If the same number of 3’s, 5’s, and 7’s are added together to get a sum of 105, what is the total number of 3’s used in the sum? 28. Dan likes bowling, pool, and math. He decides to number the 10 bowling pins 1 through 10 and adds up the numbers on each pin, obtaining a number P. Then he n out of pure laziness out of ure laziness

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What do you think of these upcoming WWE Films?
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Inside Out: (Starring Triple H) For the last 13 years, AJ (Triple H) has been behind bars, convicted of murdering his stepfather, who was abusing his mother. Now released, AJ wants to start a small business and live a crime-free life. Unfortunately, within hours of leaving prison, his oldest and best friend, Jack (Michael Rapaport) involves AJ in an accidental shooting in which a man is killed, forcing Jack to skip town. When Jack's father and local mob boss Vic Small (Bruce Dern) comes looking for retribution, AJ is compelled to protect Jack's family and himself even if it means returning to prison. http://www.wwe.com/inside/overtheropes/wwestudios/news/triplein sideout Bending The Rules: (Starring Edge) Theo Gold (Jamie Kennedy), the New Orleans Assistant District Attorney, is about to have the worst day of his life. Not only does his wife decide to leave him on the eve of his birthday, but he manages to lose a high profile case against detective Nick Blades (Edge). Now, the only thing Theo has left is the car his father, Herb (Phillip Baker Hall), entrusted to him - a 1956 Studebaker Goldenhawk. But when he discovers that his father’s pride and joy has been stolen, Theo is determined to do whatever it takes to get that car back. The same person he just tried to put away, Nick Blades, becomes his only ally in the police department. As the two set off to find the car, action and comedy quickly develop, because the stolen car is merely a small piece of a much larger puzzle. http://www2.wwe.com/inside/overtheropes/news/bendingther ulesproduction Barricade (Or Supernatural Barricade Idk anymore lol): (Starring Eric McCormack) The supernatural thriller focuses “on a psychiatrist, seeking to find normalcy after the sudden passing of his wife, who takes his two kids to a remote cabin for healing and bonding. Their joy soon turns to despair when the family is terrorized by unknown forces and the father will stop at nothing to save them from peril.” http://www.wrestlescoop.com/2011/03/10/new-details-on- wwes-barricade-movie-tonights-superstars-matches-more/ Famil y Reunion: (Starring John Cena) (Formerly titled Blood Brothers) In the film, the Cleary brothers, Sam (JOHN CENA), Leo (ETHAN EMBRY) and Douglas (BOYD HOLBROOK) take dysfunctional families to a new level: Sam and Leo have grown up hating each other and neither likes their juvenile delinquent kid brother, Douglas, to whom they've only recently been introduced. The sons share the same father, a womanizing drunk, but all have different mothers. Their father died a rich man and when they're brought together by their sister Nina (AMY SMART) to learn which of them will inherit the old man's fortune, they are handed an unpleasant surprise. http://www.411mania.com/wrestling/news/185301/John-Cen as-Next-Movie-Gets-A-New-Name.htm No One Lives: (Starring Luke Evans) Plot for the horror pic, penned by David Cohen, revolves around a ruthless gang that takes a young couple hostage in an abandoned house in the middle of nowhere. When the captive girl is killed, the tables are unexpectedly turned, and the gang finds itself outsmarted by a seasoned killer. http://www.wrestlesite.com/wwe/wwe-films-next-movie-proj ect-no-one-lives/ What do you think of these upcoming projects from WWE Films? Which one do you think will be the best out of the 5?

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If I had Netflix I might watch them but then again I like Toxic Avenger and Troma films.

I got hit by a car and?
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(in order for me to ask you my question i have to describe to you what happened so please be patient and read this entire post, my question will be more torward the bottom, thanks!)Okay so Thursday of this week i was comming back home from the mall and got dropped off by the bus at the station wich is about a 20 minute walk from my home. And as i walked torward home me and my friend realised the sidewalks were covered in 4ft+ snow and we were forced to walk on the side of the road(and because the town didnt plow the sidewalks i was thinking that in a way they are at fault? let me know what you think). As we were walking i was behinf my friend and i got slammed from behind and i dont remember much of what happened but i do know that my left arm was kind of swinging behind me when i got hit and my elbow was forced into me lower left side of my back and i was thrown into a snowbank. The driver turned around and came back asking if i needed an ambulance, i was in too much shock to realise i was even in pain at all. I struggled to stand up from the snow bank and then said "no im not in pain at all its fine" but i had my friend get his liscence plate number anyway, and i also got a very good look at him, he was as tall as my shoulders and he was red headed with a small beard. As i continued to walk home about 3 minutes before i got to my house i was in excrutiating pain and ive had back pains since i was younger but nothing this severe, the crash made my pains much worse. The last two nights i tossed and turned in bed and was in massive amounts of pain and constantly felt dizzy, and the night i got hit i went to the police station because my stubborn father thought "i have to report it to the police before we go to the hospital" and when we got to the police station i gave them my info, told them what happened, and gave them the liscence plate number. I said the car that hit me looked like a ford explorer and the cop told me the number came up as a van, now, i dont know about anyone else, but being hit from behind and feeling confused/scared a van from behind 'COULD' look like an suv, especially when you feel like your in a different world. The police officer had the EMT check me out and surprisingly i had no markings on me. Regardless of having no marks, my back is in alot of pain. The EMT said it would be a good ideea to get checked out at the hospital but they are probably going to tell me the same thing he did, i was going to be sore for the next few days, so i then decided to go home and sleep it off for the next few days but my pains havnt reduced one bit and i was going to see my personal doctor and have him check me out.(the main reason i didnt go to the hospital is because i am SCARED so badly of the hospital and not to mention i didnt want to spend new years away from family/friends and have them worrying about me). Now my big question is if i go to the police station today or tommorow and see if they got any information on the driver and i even described what he looked like and it was accurate information, would i then be able to get money for what happened? Especially if my doctor says that theres something wrong with me? Is the town even at fault at all for not plowing the sidewalks? And i also wanted to know if because i have no markings will the law think im a lier about my back pains if i do take this to the courts? Thankyou, please give me the best information you can! (oh, i forgot to mention, im not sure if it makes a difference but this happened in the town of Holbrook, in the state of Massachusetts).

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1st, you should have insisted on police asap! and not let the guy leave. 'he' should have also been a man, and insisted you not move and wait on police/rescue. now, your at the mercy of the police to track this guy down, and you'll need to get a lawyer to 'sue' him for damages. but, its 'his word against yours' so this could go back-n- forth in court for awhile. now, the same lawyer can tell you if you havea suit against city but that gets tricky w/ weather...the 'acts of god' and all.. good luck, hope your backs ok, thats the most important thing," you". are you ok? sounds like if you have witnesses, and maybe a video off a store camera or the like, you might have a good case! dont let it go! stay with it, you could be hurt and not know it, back injuries are tricky. good luck.

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Mae’s car was a low-end Mercedes from the early nineties, a real piece of work. It was painted some kind of grimy turquoise with grey paneling. The leather seats were worn and ripped in parts, and it took about five tries to get the old thing to start. With all of this aside, I couldn’t have appreciated it more. It got us where we had to go, just like it always had. Every ding had a back-story, and to go through them all would take days. We hopped inside and started to drive. My house sat on the outskirts of Sedona, in small residential neighborhood with dull Mexican-style housing. The Red Rocks towered off in the distance, disillusioned and unextrordinary. When you see something enough times it always loses its luster, even living in the Taj Mahal would lose its appeal eventually. We drove down 40, past Winona and Winslow, getting our last looks at the kitschy shops and earthy restaurants. I would miss the lentil burgers from Sam’s and the geoids from the crystal shop downtown, but I had to move on, and I had to do it now or I never would. We drove until Sanders, and by then we were on a clear path out of the whole damn state. Our eyes had begun drooping back in Holbrook, and we finally had to admit defeat. We pulled into a roadside motel, advertising rooms for $40 a night. “If this place gives me tetanus,” Mae grumbled and she scanned the parking lot, “you’re paying for my hospital stay.” The check-in building was hardly more than a glorified shack, the wooden door hung precariously on its worn hinges, opening and closing in the slight breeze. I pushed it open hesitantly. The inside was decked out in cliché western décor; cheap horse statues, plasticy green carpet, and potted cacti. Behind a stretching wood desk a wizened old man stood over a bulky monitor. He looked up suddenly as we walked in, his eyes shamelessly looking us up and down. “We’d like a room” I stated dryly. “What parts ya girls from? What ya’ll doing out at this time a night?” “Just a room, please” Mae hissed. The man took the hint, quickly busying himself with checking us in on his outdated computer. As we turned to walk to out of room, his voice piped up timidly, “You know, if you gals gave me a little peek you could stay for free.” We spun around in unison. My hands clenched at my sides and my voice came out in a hoarse, strained whisper. “I don’t think that will be happening, sir.” My reaction startled him. His mouth snapped shut, and he looked awkwardly down at his feet as Mae and I left. I began to strip the bed sheets as soon as I entered the room. Mae dropped down onto the edge of the mattress and looked at me for a while, her eyes were tired but her full lips were parted with interest, as if she had something to say but didn’t know how to approach it. “Elle,” she began, finally. “I’m glad we did this, but. Well, where are we going? Do we know what we’re doing? I mean, we don’t even have a road map” The usually collected, laid-back Mae began to breathe heavily, her eyes becoming frantic and concerned. I rushed over and put my hand firmly on her shoulder. “We’re gonna drive to New York and we can start a new life. We can work our way up. We can be so much more.” She said nothing, but I could feel her body relax, and her eyes grow tired once again. I stood there a moment longer, then added as an afterthought, “I promise.” I flicked off the lights and we fell asleep, fully clothed, shoes on and everything.

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Wow, I'm pretty impressed! Great start so far. The only times I slipped over reading, (and this may just be my fault,) were when you mentioned Mae's lips being parted with interest right after the hotel owner made the peek-proposition. I, as I first read it, felt like that was a sensual comment (even though it clearly isn't.) Also, if the main character is stripping the bed and Mae is by the edge of it, the description of the main character "rushing over" to Mae seems a but forced. Maybe: "as soon as I acknowledged Mae's sudden change in mood, I let go of the last sheet and took place by her side, taking the curve of her shoulder in my hand." Ha I dont know. But yes, I am impressed! Your descriptions are vivid.

need help/Inspiration/opinions/suggestions etc. about my story?
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I'm 15 and I write a lot, but I've never followed through with an entire book. i like how this is going though and I wasn't to follow through with it. be brutal, please. Don't be scared by how long it looks, it reads easy. Oh, and the 1st chapter is in my last question if you're interested. Mae’s car was a low-end Mercedes from the early nineties, a real piece of work. It was painted some kind of grimy turquoise with grey paneling. The leather seats were worn and ripped in parts, and it took about five tries to get the old thing to start. With all of this aside, I couldn’t have appreciated it more. It got us where we had to go, just like it always had. Every ding had a back-story, and to go through them all would take days. We hopped inside and started to drive. My house sat on the outskirts of Sedona, in small residential neighborhood with dull Mexican-style housing. The Red Rocks towered off in the distance, disillusioned and unextrordinary. When you see something enough times it always loses its luster, even living in the Taj Mahal would lose its appeal eventually. We drove down 40, past Winona and Winslow, getting our last looks at the kitschy shops and earthy restaurants. I would miss the lentil burgers from Sam’s and the geoids from the crystal shop downtown, but I had to move on, and I had to do it now or I never would. We drove until Sanders, and by then we were on a clear path out of the whole damn state. Our eyes had begun drooping back in Holbrook, and we finally had to admit defeat. We pulled into a roadside motel, advertising rooms for $40 a night. “If this place gives me tetanus,” Mae grumbled and she scanned the parking lot, “you’re paying for my hospital stay.” The check-in building was hardly more than a glorified shack, the wooden door hung precariously on its worn hinges, opening and closing in the slight breeze. I pushed it open hesitantly. The inside was decked out in cliché western décor; cheap horse statues, plasticy green carpet, and potted cacti. Behind a stretching wood desk a wizened old man stood over a bulky monitor. He looked up suddenly as we walked in, his eyes shamelessly looking us up and down. “We’d like a room” I stated dryly. “What parts ya girls from? What ya’ll doing out at this time a night?” “Just a room, please” Mae hissed. The man took the hint, quickly busying himself with checking us in on his outdated computer. As we turned to walk to out of room, his voice piped up timidly, “You know, if you gals gave me a little peek you could stay for free.” We spun around in unison. My hands clenched at my sides and my voice came out in a hoarse, strained whisper. “I don’t think that will be happening, sir.” My reaction startled him. His mouth snapped shut, and he looked awkwardly down at his feet as Mae and I left. I began to strip the bed sheets as soon as I entered the room. Mae dropped down onto the edge of the mattress and looked at me for a while, her eyes were tired but her full lips were parted with interest, as if she had something to say but didn’t know how to approach it. “Elle,” she began, finally. “I’m glad we did this, but. Well, where are we going? Do we know what we’re doing? I mean, we don’t even have a road map” The usually collected, laid-back Mae began to breathe heavily, her eyes becoming frantic and concerned. I rushed over and put my hand firmly on her shoulder. “We’re gonna drive to New York and we can start a new life. We can work our way up. We can be so much more.” She said nothing, but I could feel her body relax, and her eyes grow tired once again. I stood there a moment longer, then added as an afterthought, “I promise.” I flicked off the lights and we fell asleep, fully clothed, shoes on and everything.

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You are an amazing writer. I've read tons of books and half of them is crap compared to yours.

opinions on my first novel? Criticism please?
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Mae’s car was a low-end Mercedes from the early nineties, a real piece of work. It was painted some kind of grimy turquoise with grey paneling. The leather seats were worn and ripped in parts, and it took about five tries to get the old thing to start. With all of this aside, I couldn’t have appreciated it more. It got us where we had to go, just like it always had. Every ding had a back-story, and to go through them all would take days. My house had sat on the outskirts of Sedona, a small residential neighborhood with dull Mexican-style housing. The red rocks towered off in the distance, disillusioned and unextrordinary. When you see something enough times it always loses its luster, even living in the Taj Mahal would lose its appeal eventually. We drove down 40, past Winona and Winslow, getting our last looks at the kitschy shops and earthy restaurants. I would miss the lentil burgers from Saunder’s and the geoids from the crystal shop downtown, but I had to move on, and I had to do it now or I never would. We drove until Sanders, and by then we were on a clear path out of the whole damn state. Our eyes had begun drooping back in Holbrook, and we finally had to admit defeat. We pulled into a roadside motel, advertising rooms for $40 a night. “If this place gives me tetanus,” Mae grumbled and she scanned the parking lot, “you’re paying for my hospital stay.” The check-in building was hardly more than a glorified shack, the wooden door hung precariously on its worn hinges, opening and closing in the slight breeze. I pushed it open hesitantly. The inside was decked out in cliché western décor; cheap horse statues, plasticy green carpet, and potted cacti. Behind a stretching wood desk a wizened old man stood over a bulky monitor. He looked up suddenly as we walked in, his eyes shamelessly looking us up and down. “We’d like a room” I said, unamused. “What parts ya girls from? What ya’ll doing out at this time a night?” “Just a room, please” Mae hissed. The man took the hint, quickly busying himself with checking us in on his outdated computer. As we turned to walk to out of room, his voice piped up timidly, “You know, if you gals gave me a little peek you could stay for free.” We spun around in unison. My hands clenched at my sides and my voice came out in a hoarse, strained whisper. “I don’t think that will be happening, sir.” My reaction startled him. His mouth snapped shut, and he looked awkwardly down at his feet as Mae and I left. I began to strip the bed sheets as soon as I entered the room. Mae dropped down onto the edge of the mattress and looked at me for a while, her eyes were tired but her full lips were parted with interest, as if she had something to say but didn’t know how to approach it. “Elle,” she began, finally. “I’m glad we did this, but. Well, where are we going? Do we know what we’re doing? I mean, we don’t even have a road map” The usually collected, laid-back Mae began to breathe heavily, her eyes becoming frantic and concerned. I rushed over and put my hand firmly on her shoulder. “We’re gonna drive to New York and we can start a new life. We can work our way up. We can be so much more.” She said nothing, but I could feel her body relax, and her eyes grow tired once again. I stood there a moment longer, then added as an afterthought, “I promise.” I flicked off the lights and we fell asleep, fully clothed, shoes on and everything.

Answer:
This reads well, it flows, it has character and is easy to follow. It is extremely well written and interesting. All the characters seem to have character. I think it is excellent. Look out everyone, Best Seller coming through!