ANYONE WILLING TO READ MY CLAREMONT SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY? 10 POINTS! ITS ABOUT THE BEATLES!! :) ? Question: Topic: Leadership is a constant theme and emphasis at CMC. In fact, one of the ways we describe CMC students is "Leaders in the Making." Identify and discuss a person, fictional or nonfictional, who has helped shape culture and thought. You may select someone from any field: literature, the arts, science, politics, history, athletics, business, education, etc.
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Music guides many through their day to day lives. Whether it’s the Doppler sound of a passing car’s radio, or a song bird’s chirping at dawn, music is impossible to avoid. Therefore, a leader in music is a leader in everyday life. The musicians that strum to the beat of existence, in all of its glories and woes, have impacted society just as much as any others whose names will forever be preserved in history books or on the covers of novels. The Beatles, as they sang of broken hearts, love, politics, drugs, and the many emotions every individual encounters, influenced the minds of many and became legendary leaders.
By the time the Beatles became popular, music was far from new. It was essential for them to break the traditional mold of a musician: a center star vocalist accompanied by a group of secondary musicians. The Beatles can be considered the first official “boy band,” breeding ample sexual hysteria in their millions of shrieking pre-teen fans. The group had a non-threatening cuddliness and notably sold below the puberty line. The Beatles paved the way for bands to come, leading in group music to set the unapproachable standard for their future competitors.
After building charm in the United Kingdom and abroad, the Beatles became one of the first internationally renowned bands. Viewed by over 75 million people, the Beatles’ appearance on The Ed Sullivan Show made history. Teen crime across American stopped completely. Families crowded around their television sets; men humming the tunes in harmony, women grasping their hearts in lust. The U.K. invasion had begun in the United States as the Beatles expressed their overseas homeland in an array of enjoyable sounds. A number of Americans felt that the group was relatable, despite their dissimilar backgrounds. The next few years of ‘Beatlemania’ marked an era of change for the Fab-Four. They already had a loyal fan base, and their appeal was greater than ever. It was a time to take risks.
The Beatles were the first mainstream band to experiment with a number of different styles of music. Regardless of their producers’ wants, the group really pushed the envelope when recording tracks influenced by psychedelia and drug use. They sang about vivid colors and insanely high times when a huge number of people were in need of music for their drug induced hallucinations. They shaped the culture of the 60's, taking the freedom of speech in song to an entirely new level. Today, their influence can be seen in every type of music. From political musicians singing of the corruptness of their own government, to hip-hop artists openly blurbing about pricy cognacs and sex, the Beatles were the first to practice their freedoms in the form of song. Even some modern classical music has been shaped by the Beatles’ experimentation. Instead of following the traditional build of song, artists now practice outside of the original four count beat and verse-chorus formula. The Beatles truly broke the mold, yet also managed to keep appeal.
In fear that the group’s many anti-war lyrics and demonstrations would cause uproar by the fragile American government, the band’s production staff limited studio time and attempted to persuade the group to practice their original simplicity. Already endowed with a large amount of capital and frustrated by their record company’s control, the Beatles founded Apple Corps to replace their earlier company and form a conglomerate. Apple Corps became the first company with a band as its steer beneficiaries. They managed the company themselves, funding unknown musicians and obscure films in an attempt to give struggling artists the big-break the band had once received. Although the members of The Beatles were ignorant in finance and naive of the true business world, they were the first band to create their own production company, using their fame to encourage artistic newcomers. Today, a number of professional musicians manage their own record labels and production companies, thanking The Beatles as their outset.
The Beatles were a clear reflection of society. Their hair styles, clothes, and statements made them trendsetters, providing the stray teenage soul a path of following in an unclear time of political and economic strife. They provided desperately needed music for a generation of baby boomers, whose lives were in need of harmony. Although the Beatles only played their music for less than a decade, their influence will be felt for centuries to come. I, personally, began playing the guitar after listening to the catchy melodies of the band who performed year
who performed years before my time. Millions of top-charting musicians credit The Beatles as their primary influence. The Fab-Four have, and will continue to encourage change and innovativeness in the many forms of traditional art.
That's the rest of it.. Dunno why it got cut off. Thanks for reading.. I would appreciate ANY feedback what-so-ever.. Seriously though, I know it's long and tedious, but I would appreciate it so much if you read it :)
Hey! Thanks everyone, I really appreciate the feedback.. Also, I'm a little bit concerned that I wrote about a small group rather than a person like the topic asked for. I worked my butt off on this paper, so I hope they won't mind. I'm actually not that worried about it. :D
Also, that's not how I'm going to end it; I still need maybe a sentence or two to wrap it up. Any ideas would be greatly appreciated.
Oh, and I meant "teen crime across America" minus the "n" :)
Hey, thanks everyone for reading it. Wow, it means so much!
Also.. Is it correct to write The Beatles, or the Beatles? I did a bit of both in the essay, not too sure which one is correct.
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It's a good essay, even though many may not think the beatles are good leadership icons you made it seem that they were!
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