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Plymouth : Barracuda 1964-1965 Valiant Barracuda
Plymouth : Barracuda 1964-1965 Valiant Barracuda
$500.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 14h 57m
Lexus : RX 330 Pristine 2005 Lexus RX330 SUV
Lexus : RX 330 Pristine 2005 Lexus RX330 SUV
$14,550.00
$17,950.00
Time Left: 14h 58m
Mazda : Mazda3 SP23 2005 Mazda3 Mazda 3 SP23 Great Condition
Mazda : Mazda3 SP23 2005 Mazda3 Mazda 3 SP23 Great Condition
$5,900.00 (36 Bids)
Time Left: 18h 11m
Ford : Thunderbird Landau 1966 Ford Thunderbird Landau
Ford : Thunderbird Landau 1966 Ford Thunderbird Landau
$6,500.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 18h 40m
Ford sedan 1937 ford 4 door delux sedan street rod
Ford sedan 1937 ford 4 door delux sedan street rod
$8,001.00 (19 Bids)
Time Left: 20h 7m
BMW : Z3 2.8L 1997 BMW Z3 2.8L Roadster
BMW : Z3 2.8L 1997 BMW Z3 2.8L Roadster
$6,100.05 (15 Bids)
Time Left: 20h 58m
Chrysler : Crossfire Limited Showroom condition,  GORGEOUS
Chrysler : Crossfire Limited Showroom condition, GORGEOUS
$11,100.00 (2 Bids)
Time Left: 21h 31m
Ford : E-Series Van 250 Ford E250 Cargo Van No Reserve Auction
Ford : E-Series Van 250 Ford E250 Cargo Van No Reserve Auction
$1,675.00 (10 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 1h 48m
Chevrolet : Camaro Z 28 1969 CHEVROLET CAMARO Z 28 X77 CODE CAR
Chevrolet : Camaro Z 28 1969 CHEVROLET CAMARO Z 28 X77 CODE CAR
$43,900.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 3h 46m
Chevrolet : Chevelle LS6 1970 CHEVROLET CHEVELLE LS6 - RARE!!!
Chevrolet : Chevelle LS6 1970 CHEVROLET CHEVELLE LS6 - RARE!!!
$89,900.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 5h 49m
Chevrolet : Impala 1958 CHEVROLET IMPALA,  FRAME OFF RESTORED
Chevrolet : Impala 1958 CHEVROLET IMPALA, FRAME OFF RESTORED
$54,900.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 5h 49m
Ford : Mustang ROUSH ROUSH P-51 POWERED STREET  DRAG CAR
Ford : Mustang ROUSH ROUSH P-51 POWERED STREET DRAG CAR
$47,900.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 5h 50m
Ford : Mustang 1968 FORD MUSTANG SHELBY GT 500
Ford : Mustang 1968 FORD MUSTANG SHELBY GT 500
$109,900.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 5h 52m
Dodge : Nitro 2009 Dodge Nitro R T 4.0L!! 4X4 Low Miles
Dodge : Nitro 2009 Dodge Nitro R T 4.0L!! 4X4 Low Miles
$15,200.00
$19,995.00
Time Left: 1d 18h 19m
Chevrolet : C-10 Silver with red trim low mileage
Chevrolet : C-10 Silver with red trim low mileage
$6,000.00
$7,000.00
Time Left: 1d 23h 4m

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Just to solidify my story: What do you think? Please critique?
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Ok I'm almost done with my story. I've got the outline done, most of the details planned out, and I've got the title picked out. Now I just want to know what you think: The story takes place in Kansas City, Missouri in the late 90s. Dets. Valerie Dane and James Macall are given the case of Summer Aiken, a 17-year-old mom to a 2-year-old daughter, Sydney. Summer was found in an alley, apparently gang-raped and beaten to death. While gathering information involving the case, Summer confides in the detectives that she knows that she doesn’t have much time left and that the treatments that they’re trying aren’t working. All she wants is to see her daughter. When they go to Summer’s apartment to get Sydney from the babysitter, the babysitter is gone and so is Sydney. The case goes from rape and assault to kidnapping. When they go to Leah Aiken’s home it is discovered the entire story of how her family fell apart. Leah says that she would do anything to make Sydney’s life better. This, therefore, makes her a suspect. Next, they approach Sydney’s father, Ashton Berkeley, who is 18. He tells them that he wanted to be with Sydney, but his parents banned him from having any contact with Summer or his daughter. He wanted to take Sydney away from Summer because he heard about her being a prostitute and thought Summer was a bad parent. This also makes him a suspect in the kidnapping of Sydney. The detectives eventually find Sydney in the basement of a brownstone after an anonymous tip heard Sydney screaming. The babysitter is found dead with Sydney. The basement belonged to Dallas Campbell, the man that led the gang-rape of Summer. He did this because he claims that Summer cheated him out of money because she wasn't "good enough".Unfortunately, while Dallas is on trial, Summer dies of severe blood loss from the internal bleeding and multiple staff infections from the cuts she got. But she did get to spend time with her daughter, in which time she learns the word “momma”. After Summer’s passing, Ashton is awarded custody of Sydney and has his name put on Sydney’s birth certificate as her father. During this whole story, Valerie and James confront their physical and emotional attraction. Although James loves Valerie and would do anything for her, he’s not ready to let go of his deceased wife, Rachel, who died in a car accident involving a drunk driver. In the end, James learns to let go and live with the fact that his wife passed away and that she would want him to be happy with someone. The epilogue reveals that Valerie Dane was telling the story in present day to a group of new detectives as she's retiring. Please critique me. I'm tough skinned. I can handle it. hahaha Leah is Summer's mother. Sorry for not pointing that out. Once I get into a story I write without thinking sometimes. bahaha


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Pretty good, it's probably something I would read if I saw it in a bookstore. Just wanted to point out something: at the end of the first paragraph you mention a Leah Aiken. Was this maybe an early name for Summer, or another character altogether? If it's another character you should probably specify exactly who she is. I'm guessing it's just a name mix-up, though. I've done that before (the heroine of my current story has had her name changed four times). But overall, very good!