Buy Cars and Trucks in Prior Lake, Minnesota

Dodge : Challenger 1971 Dodge Challenger V8 coupe
 Dodge : Challenger 1971 Dodge Challenger V8 coupe
$3,300.00
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Mercedes-Benz : CL-Class CL550 2008 CL-550 NAVIGATION, MASSAGE SEATS, HEATED VENTED FRONT SEATS, IPOD USB, ROOF
 Mercedes-Benz : CL-Class CL550 2008 CL-550 NAVIGATION, MASSAGE SEATS, HEATED VENTED FRONT SEATS, IPOD USB, ROOF
$35,601.00 (7 Bids)
Time Left: 1h 45m
Honda : CR-V Limited Clean Honda AWD Leather Runs great limited
 Honda : CR-V Limited Clean Honda AWD Leather Runs great limited
$4,995.00
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Toyota : Tacoma SR5 Solid Axle Toyota Pickup Truck 4x4 extened cab w lockers
 Toyota : Tacoma SR5 Solid Axle Toyota Pickup Truck 4x4 extened cab w lockers
$5,995.00
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Lincoln : Mark Series Mark IV 1959 Lincoln Mark IV Convertable RARE
 Lincoln : Mark Series Mark IV 1959 Lincoln Mark IV Convertable RARE
$35,500.00
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Chevrolet : Corvette 2012 GRAND SPORT 6.2L AUTO Carbon Flash Metallic
 Chevrolet : Corvette 2012 GRAND SPORT 6.2L AUTO Carbon Flash Metallic
$43,100.00
$57,725.00
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Mercedes-Benz : 300-Series 300CD 1985 Mercedes-Benz 300CD Turbodiesel Coupe - Rare Leather Seats!
 Mercedes-Benz : 300-Series 300CD 1985 Mercedes-Benz 300CD Turbodiesel Coupe - Rare Leather Seats!
$8,995.00 (0 Bids)
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Chevrolet : Impala Impala 1961 Impala Bubble Top 340 409 4 speed muncie Red & White 61 Chevy Driver
 Chevrolet : Impala Impala 1961 Impala Bubble Top 340 409 4 speed muncie Red & White 61 Chevy Driver
$7,800.00
$11,500.00
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Chevrolet : Impala Impala 1964 Impala SS Convertible 409 400 HP 4 Speed Numbers Matching Rare 64 Chevy
 Chevrolet : Impala Impala 1964 Impala SS Convertible 409 400 HP 4 Speed Numbers Matching Rare 64 Chevy
$25,500.00
$31,500.00
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MG : MGB MG - MGB 1980
 MG : MGB MG - MGB 1980
$2,999.99
$3,999.99
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Cadillac : Escalade 2007 CADILLAC ESCALADE AWD NAV ENT 22' WHEELS VERY CLEAN PEARL WHITE WARRANTY
 Cadillac : Escalade 2007 CADILLAC ESCALADE AWD NAV ENT 22' WHEELS VERY CLEAN PEARL WHITE WARRANTY
$25,000.00
$25,995.00
Time Left: 19h 51m
Mercedes-Benz : R-Class R350 4MATIC PRE-OWNED 2011 R-350 4MATIC AWD, P1 PACKAGE, DVD, PANORAMIC ROOF, ONLY 580 MILES
 Mercedes-Benz : R-Class R350 4MATIC PRE-OWNED 2011 R-350 4MATIC AWD, P1 PACKAGE, DVD, PANORAMIC ROOF, ONLY 580 MILES
$24,700.00 (30 Bids)
Time Left: 21h 1m
Nissan : Pathfinder Silver Editi 2011 NISSAN PATHFINDER 4X4 SILVER EDITION, HEATED LEATHER SEATS, 3RD ROW, CAMERA
 Nissan : Pathfinder Silver Editi 2011 NISSAN PATHFINDER 4X4 SILVER EDITION, HEATED LEATHER SEATS, 3RD ROW, CAMERA
$15,700.00 (9 Bids)
Time Left: 21h 1m
Lexus : GX NAVIGATION, 2010 GX460 WHITE TAN, NAVIGATION, 3RD SEAT, BLUETOOTH, A C SEATS, F-R HEATED
 Lexus : GX NAVIGATION, 2010 GX460 WHITE TAN, NAVIGATION, 3RD SEAT, BLUETOOTH, A C SEATS, F-R HEATED
$35,100.00 (12 Bids)
Time Left: 21h 1m
Hummer : H1 H1 duramax H1 hummer hmc4 duramax conversion alpha interior
 Hummer : H1 H1 duramax H1 hummer hmc4 duramax conversion alpha interior
$40,000.00
$70,000.00
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Ford : Excursion Limited 2000 Ford Excursion Limited 7.3L Diesel 4WD GREAT SHAPE NO RESERVE
 Ford : Excursion Limited 2000 Ford Excursion Limited 7.3L Diesel 4WD GREAT SHAPE NO RESERVE
$7,100.00 (24 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 5h 57m
Mercedes-Benz : E-Class 2007 Mercedes Benz E63 AMG Flint Grey, Nav, Sunroof, P2, iPod, Elec Trunk
 Mercedes-Benz : E-Class 2007 Mercedes Benz E63 AMG Flint Grey, Nav, Sunroof, P2, iPod, Elec Trunk
$40,000.00
Time Left: 1d 6h 29m
Lincoln : Town Car 1997 Lincoln Town Car Limousine 120 inch Stretch 10 Passenger No Rust
 Lincoln : Town Car 1997 Lincoln Town Car Limousine 120 inch Stretch 10 Passenger No Rust
$4,650.00 (15 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 11h 41m
Ford : F-350 Lariat FX4 2003 Ford F350 7.3L Lariat Crew Cab w Waste Vegetable Oil Conversion
 Ford : F-350 Lariat FX4 2003 Ford F350 7.3L Lariat Crew Cab w Waste Vegetable Oil Conversion
$9,955.00
$16,000.00
Time Left: 1d 18h 18m
Cadillac : Series 60 1937 Cadillac Series 60
 Cadillac : Series 60 1937 Cadillac Series 60
$28,500.00 (0 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 19h 59m
Other Makes Cars for Children Humvee Hummer H1 Rare Exotic Coolest Toy in the world MUST SEE
 Other Makes Cars for Children Humvee Hummer H1 Rare Exotic Coolest Toy in the world MUST SEE
$19,500.00
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Nissan : Pathfinder 4WD 4dr V8 L 2011 PATHFINDER LE V8, 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD, BOSE, TOW, SUNROOF, HEATED LEATHER
 Nissan : Pathfinder 4WD 4dr V8 L 2011 PATHFINDER LE V8, 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD, BOSE, TOW, SUNROOF, HEATED LEATHER
$24,544.00 (6 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 21h 1m
Nissan : Titan PRO-4X 2011 TITAN PRO-4X CREW CAB 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD, BLUETOOTH, ROCKFORD, TOW PACK
 Nissan : Titan PRO-4X 2011 TITAN PRO-4X CREW CAB 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD, BLUETOOTH, ROCKFORD, TOW PACK
$15,251.51 (8 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 21h 1m
Nissan : Titan SL PRE-OWNED 2011 TITAN SL CREW CAB, 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD TOW, LEATHER, CANADA L@@K
 Nissan : Titan SL PRE-OWNED 2011 TITAN SL CREW CAB, 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD TOW, LEATHER, CANADA L@@K
$15,100.00 (3 Bids)
Time Left: 1d 21h 1m
Dodge : Intrepid SE 2004 Black Intrepid!
 Dodge : Intrepid SE 2004 Black Intrepid!
$3,499.00 (0 Bids)
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Jeep : Wrangler rubicon jeep wrangler 392 VVT HEMI
 Jeep : Wrangler rubicon jeep wrangler 392 VVT HEMI
$65,000.00
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Chevrolet : Silverado 1500 LTZ 2008 Chevy Silverado Crew Cab 2WD LTZ Vortec Max
 Chevrolet : Silverado 1500 LTZ 2008 Chevy Silverado Crew Cab 2WD LTZ Vortec Max
$25,995.00
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Jeep : Liberty Sport 2010 Jeep Liberty Sport 4x4. Automatic. Cloth. CD player.
 Jeep : Liberty Sport 2010 Jeep Liberty Sport 4x4. Automatic. Cloth. CD player.
$16,900.00
$19,900.00
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Lexus : LX 2009 Lexus L `09 Lexus LX570, Silver w Gray Leather, HDD Nav, Mark Levinson Sound, Rear DVD
 Lexus : LX 2009 Lexus L `09 Lexus LX570, Silver w Gray Leather, HDD Nav, Mark Levinson Sound, Rear DVD
$63,250.00
$69,900.00
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BMW : X5 xDrive30i 2009 BMW X5 3.0i XDrive, automatic, Premium Package, Panorama Roof, 3rd row seat
 BMW : X5 xDrive30i 2009 BMW X5 3.0i XDrive, automatic, Premium Package, Panorama Roof, 3rd row seat
$36,900.00
$39,900.00
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Chevrolet : Blazer Blazer 5.7L V8 TBI OHV 16VTransmission:AutomaticMileage:119, 533Drivetrain:Four Wheel Dr
 Chevrolet : Blazer Blazer 5.7L V8 TBI OHV 16VTransmission:AutomaticMileage:119, 533Drivetrain:Four Wheel Dr
$600.00 (2 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 19h 55m
Nissan : Pathfinder LE V6 2010 PATHFINDER LE V6, 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD, BOSE, BLUETOOTH, USA CANADA L@@K
 Nissan : Pathfinder LE V6 2010 PATHFINDER LE V6, 4X4, NAVIGATION, DVD, BOSE, BLUETOOTH, USA CANADA L@@K
$17,600.00 (15 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 21h 5m
Nissan : Murano SL 2010 NISSAN MURANO SL AWD, HEATED LEATHER SEATS, BACK UP CAMERA, BOSE, XENON
 Nissan : Murano SL 2010 NISSAN MURANO SL AWD, HEATED LEATHER SEATS, BACK UP CAMERA, BOSE, XENON
$6,050.00 (16 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 21h 5m
Mercedes-Benz : SL-Class SL550 2009 SL 550 CONVERTIBLE, RED TAN, NAVIGATION, BLUETOOTH, IPOD, AMG RIMS, L@@K
 Mercedes-Benz : SL-Class SL550 2009 SL 550 CONVERTIBLE, RED TAN, NAVIGATION, BLUETOOTH, IPOD, AMG RIMS, L@@K
$45,100.00 (9 Bids)
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Lincoln : MKS 2010 Lincoln 2010 Lincoln MKS AWD. Ultimate Package. Navigation. Dual roof, 26169 miles.
 Lincoln : MKS 2010 Lincoln 2010 Lincoln MKS AWD. Ultimate Package. Navigation. Dual roof, 26169 miles.
$29,900.00
$32,900.00
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BMW : M3 coupe 1998 BMW M3 coupe 5-SPEED SALVAGE TITLE
 BMW : M3 coupe 1998 BMW M3 coupe 5-SPEED SALVAGE TITLE
$5,000.00 (0 Bids)
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Mercedes-Benz : E-Class 2dr Cpe E350 2dr Cpe E350 Certified 3.5L NAV CD P1 Pano Roof Htd Sts
 Mercedes-Benz : E-Class 2dr Cpe E350 2dr Cpe E350 Certified 3.5L NAV CD P1 Pano Roof Htd Sts
$10,100.00 (2 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 21h 48m
Mercedes-Benz : M-Class 4MATIC 4dr 3 4MATIC 4dr 3 Diesel Certified P1 Nav Htd Sts Ipod Bluetec
 Mercedes-Benz : M-Class 4MATIC 4dr 3 4MATIC 4dr 3 Diesel Certified P1 Nav Htd Sts Ipod Bluetec
$27,100.00 (14 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 22h 24m
BMW : 3-Series 4dr Sdn 335i 4dr Sdn 335i 3.0L CD Warranty Leather Sport Premium Xenon
 BMW : 3-Series 4dr Sdn 335i 4dr Sdn 335i 3.0L CD Warranty Leather Sport Premium Xenon
$8,100.00 (13 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 22h 47m
Chevrolet : Corvette 2dr Converti 2dr Convertible 5.7L Convertible CD Leather Auto Alloy Wheels
 Chevrolet : Corvette 2dr Converti 2dr Convertible 5.7L Convertible CD Leather Auto Alloy Wheels
$17,800.00 (12 Bids)
Time Left: 2d 23h 22m

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Anyone know where to get a car for under $2000(that's not a piece) in the Prior Lake, MN area?
Question:
Willing to travel at least 20 miles.

Answer:
http://allinnn.nikkibooks.com A very informative website, you can also get much information in website.

Anyone know where to get a car for under/around $2000(that's not a piece) in the Prior Lake, MN area?
Question:
Willing to travel about 20 miles.

Answer:
> (that's not a piece) It is NOT clear what that might mean. If you found a car that has beat up body, but the engine and tranny is very dependable, is that "a piece of crap?" In that price range you (mostly likely) will not find a great body and great mechanism. I drive such a car. My 94 civic runs powerful like a new car. But the body is beat up from all the NYC people parking so close and streets being narrow. So you MUST compromise somewhere if you look for a bargain. ====== Here's some rules you should consider when buying a used car (1) don't get sold on the paint job = meaning cars having good exterior, fancy CD radio, etc. (2) look for car with sound ENGINE + TRANNY + SUSPENSION. (3) test every button, knob, switch, slider, etc.. Ex: even in the summer test out the heater & even in the winter test out the AC (if you can). Slide the AC/heater to fan1, fan2, fan3, etc. then slid the vent to defrost, front, bottom, etc. Test the high beam, low beam, etc. Test (flip) the visor. Test the alarm. Test all 4 doors. Test the rear defogger. ***** TEST EVERYTHING. (4) BEFORE the first start, open the engine bay and see if the engine is already warmed up. Many engines starts well when already warmed up, but may have problems when cold (or cold start). (5) test drive with the sound system off and window down. Listen for weird sound coming from the wheels & suspension. (6) Look inside the engine bay to see if you can see see leaks, etc. It is normal to see some oil and grease. But too much means that the car is leaking oil somewhere. Too clean (really clean) means they just wash the engine bay - possibly hiding some oil leaks. (7) check the engine oil dip stick. If the oil is BRAND NEW CLEAN, the seller MIGHT be hiding something. If the oil is jet black and /or smells like gasoline (or burnt), you might have engine problem). (8) once you are satisfied with the above - you can NOW take it to the mechanic for the engine + tranny + suspension inspection. He won't find everything, but he will find the obvious. Take it to a mechanic EVEN if you are buying from a used car dealer. They cars are NO better than cars you buy from ebay and craigslist.com. Just more expensive. good Luck... 1) Safety Ratings: http://www.safercar.gov/ http://www.iihs.org/ratings/default .aspx 2) Reliability: http://autos.msn.com/home/reliability_ra... http://www.edmunds .com/apps/ratings/rati... 3) Fuel Economy: http://www.fueleconomy.gov/feg/sbs.htm

Car travel route - Houston to Salt Lake City, March-- advice?
Question:
Airfares are really high right now, thinking of driving from Houston to SLC for skiing. I have a minivan and kids, but a video system keeps them quiet and van gets 23mpg or more. I have driven a lot in snow/ice, and bought some cable chains for the van for a prior trip to NM. mapping software is sending me through dallas, up through OK to kansas and then 40w, 70w into denver CO, then 25n to cheyenne WY, then 80 w all the way through to Park City. Is this route going to be OK in the winter conditions? Advice?

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Yuck Try this I-10W>I-17N >I-40E [ 2exits] US 89 N> UT-SR9 W>I-15N>I-84E That route is weather free until 10 minutes past the Sedona AZ exit on I-17 and then again from the second Wupatki National Monument turnoff on US 89 all the way to Kanab UT . Another way of doing that that avoids Phoenix traffic is I-10W >I-25N>I-40W>US491[ nee US-666] N If you want to see monument valley then US 64 W >US 160 W US163 N> US 191N If not then US 491 N>US 191N>I-70 W >US 6 W >I-15N In the interest of safety don't drive the US 491 portion of that in dark Safe Trip

Help with summer 2011 bucket list!?
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Hay! So me and my best friend are making a summer bucket list. We are going to be juniors so we want to remember this summer! Here's what we got so far: -------- Josh Turner Concert Being G at a Stoplight Make funny faces at people while driving Memorize all JT songs Spend a whole day on Prior Lake Have a picnic Go to Captain Jack’s at least 3X Go to the cabin Visit Jared and Travis in forest lake Buy Jessi Girly clothes Make Jessi wear them Go to the Dinky Town Restaurant Bike to Lake Calhoun Play night games with Sarah’s neighbors Make Jackson realize he’s gay Movie day Try all Baskin Robbins Flavors SIDE CHALK Go to Chuck E Cheese! Go to the purrrkkk with my push up bra Take 1000 pictures! Stay up all night and sleep all day Color 5 coloring book pages Make a new friend Make a giant cookie Try not to eat like shit everyday Talk like a bro for a day Blow some dora bubbles! Try NOT to get sunburned badly Play b ops and get more that 20 kills Play zombies and make it to round 8! Tell everybody how much we love them Stand out in a thunderstorm Buy a goldfish and not let it die Vally fair! Harass Jackson Buy red moon right before it closes Go to the dollar store and buy random stuff Go to Tommy’s malt shop Play hopscotch Harass jessi’s dad à macbook Join ACT class Buy every single kind of axe Talk like a black person all day Make an uuubbberrrly amazing country CD -------- Can anyone help us with more ideas?! We have a car and unlimited money! Oh and please don't say anything like "get wasted" or "go have sex", thanks :)

Answer:
I find the second to last one racist. How exactly does a black person speak? Stereotypical much?!?

Give 30 days notice if lease is going to expire, anyway?
Question:
Prior to moving to NYC, my husband had a three-month lease on a furnished apartment in Salt Lake City (for April, May, and June). He left on May 25th for New York and paid the rent for June. Sometime in June, his brother and sister came and cleaned out the apartment, getting rid of whatever he couldn't fit into his car to take to New York. Now we are receiving a bill from the apartment complex saying he owes for July, because he gave no written notice. Is this right? It was a three-month lease, and the apartment was completely empty by the end of June. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Answer:
what does the lease say - it should state in writing if notice needed to be given or it would automatically renew - you have to read leases closely

Why do banks want out of house repos?
Question:
what should I watch out for if Im going to make an offer on a bank repo? I see a nice bank repo asking price is 47,000 (taxes are 800 yr) but im going to offer way lower! It is one bedroom down and 2 upstairs. very nice upstairs. And sunporch in back with nice wooded porch in front and huge 2 car garge new. Nice setting in tree area with 7 lakes. On well so no water bill. New furnace and forced gas with new furnace. There is a tree near the house that needs cutting down and the screens need to be replaced a child has pushed 2 of them out! and one of the walls needs patching up. And part of the porch needs repair only 1 foot by 1 foot repair. everything else is in good shape that I saw. I had a friend go in there with me! what else should I be aware of? Leans from the prior owner? Anything else? I'm about ready to make an offer and need all info help! thank you!

Answer:
It amazes me when people respond to a question like this with "pay what they're asking" or "The bank won't accept less than what they're asking". These people obviously don't do this very often. I make my living by doing short sales and buying REO's. A short sale is when a bank sells a home for less than what was borrowed and an REO (Real Estate Owned) is what the property is called after the bank takes it back at the foreclosure auction. For instance I'm doing one right now where the loan from the previous owner was 125K and we got an agreement from the bank to take 81.5K. We just closed on one last week that appraised for 235K, the couple owed 220K and we purchased for 160K. What most people don't realize is that the lenders are penalized for real estate on their books or what they call "none performing assets". I don't know what the actual penalty is (I've hear from twice to 7 times the value) but if they have a house worth 100K, they may have to put 2-7 times the value in reserves and not be able to lend that amount until the home is sold. Banks make money from loaning money not owning real estate. If a bank sells a home for less than what is owed or less than its worth, it appears as a loss. But when you consider how much they are lossing by tying up the additional cash its actually better for them to take a smal loss on one house than to lose much more from the frozen assets. If you're new at this, CYA. Have a home inspection done (around $300 in my area and I don't do them until they except my offer) & have a title co. do a "preliminary title search" (about $125) These will let you know what, if any, problems there are with the house and the title. As far as what to offer that's a little more tricky. I typically buy from 25-50% below value (avg. around 30%) Based on your anuual taxes my quess would be that this home is worth about 60-70K. If they are asking 47 they may not come down much more. But they might...never say never. You need to find out what the value and how much equity they have in it. The title company can tell you what the previous sale amounts were. You'll want to look at what the original owners bought it for and what the lender bought it back for. Consider what your repair costs will be and find out how long it has been on the market. The bank may have already lowered it as far as they are going to go for now, but they won't sit on them forever. Once you're ready make your offer and put some contingency clauses in it such as "offer contingent upon satisfactory inspection" or "offer contingent upon buyer obtaining suitable financing" that way you can get out if needed. Give them a short time to respond (24-48 hours) and be prepared to walk away if they won't budge. Never fall in love with a house, fall in love with the deal.

Does this writing sound bad? (it's an exerpt from a piece of a novel)?
Question:
A teenage girl by the name of Lanie Holden and a boy by the name of Reed Burke embraced tightly in each other's arms in long and amorous kiss on the crest of one of the foothills of Santa Ana mountains under the beaming sun which in another hour will heat the day to 80 degrees F. With both of their eyes gently shut, each bump and press of their groins, and caresses of the hands mutually imparted pulsating points of pleasure across their bodies that faded softly while to reignite elsewhere. The purity of their graceful affection for one another dwarfed even unsullied, immaculate aquamarien waters of Lake Matthews, an artificial reservoir sprawed out prostrate at their right, stretching out for over three miles and starting three hundred feet downslope of where they stood. After making out for another ecstatic minute -- Reed’s chest cushioned against Lanie's firm breasts while Lanie tested the strength of his erection by steadily increasing the weight against its protruding tip with the pressure applied by her groin -- they affably release each other, reeling and euphoric by the joy of their make out session and leaned back side by side in relaxation against the flank of Reed’s white 2002 Chevy Impala, facing the humbling beauty of the lake. Lanie Holden was fifteen, 5' 6" in height with an oval face and tousled lavender hair cut short to the base of her neck with long bangs over the forehead which obscured her often-sad brown eyes on either side of her upturned nose. Lanie purposely styled her hair to look tousled and unkempt because Reed had told her it was cute. Her soft, smooth skin is the color of pale bisque. People often tell Lanie she is too thin for age. Currently she was dressed in sleeveless gray zip-up hoodie with hand-warming pockets over a black tank top with tight-fitting jeans flared at the ankles and white fashion athletic shoes. Lanie preferres dark-colored tops of blacks and grays, as way of reflecting her tendency for angst and mild depression, mental states generated by a particular mix of hormones all too common to some teenagers. One would not be amiss if they used the term “emo” to a summize a description of her in the best, single word even if they judged by physical appearance alone without any prior personal interaction. Reed was a year older than Lanie, an inch taller, with handsome, narrow face and skin naturally a shade tanner than Lanie's, with blue eyes and flax hair that, in a style not dissimilar to Lanie’s fall in a fringe over his eyebrows. He was dressed in olive cargo pants, white sneakers and an unbuttoned black short-sleeve shirt over a long-sleeve white t-shirt bearing the clothing company's logo. Both are unaware of their own respective, extraordinary capabilities for they have not yet unlocked them, or yet, had not had their abilities unlocked for them. And no, their hidden capabilities are not as their high school teachers would claim with great conviction: a capability to knock their respective GPAs above a 2.25 average. Their teachers would be just flat-out and pitifully incorrect. For a minute, hearing no sounds other than the hushed noise caused by the friction of a docile breeze against green grass of the hills and a lonesome, seeking cry of the hawk in search of ground prey, Reed and Lanie spaced out, reeling from the heat of their make-out session, and absorbed in the peaceful beauty of the lake and the barren surroundings rising above the flatlands and their urban smog-veiled sprawl. From the hills, miles away, cars and buildings appeared the size of matchboxes. Lanie brushed several locks of hair from her eyes which had been bent there by the breeze. "Too bad we're not allowed to swim in it," Lanie made remarked with a dreamy face in reference to Lake Matthews. "Why don't we do it anyway," Reed suggested with bravado, and then continued in a mock seductive, conspiratorial tone. "Jump the fence, take all our clothes off..." "No way," Lanie interrupted. "I don't wanna go to jail if we get caught. Besides, how are we gonna jump the fence without tearing ourselves up on barbed wire."

Answer:
Yes! I think at some points you add unnecessary details, and use words to long for somene to stayintrestee but otherwise perfect!

What do you think of these character summaries? Part Two.?
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This is the second part of my character summaries for today. The first part here: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ApPBNWVSs8i0948i4K eYYCvsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20110813100029AA4jD2z All these people are characters in a modern/fantasy story I'm working on. I would like to hear your opinions on their names, and the summaries that I have created for each of them, as well as any suggestions for improvements. Lake Tyler Montgomery – 17 • Lake grew up with his Grandmother in Vancouver Canada, like Alice, his parents died when he was very young. His Grandmother sent him to the Home shortly after his thirteenth birthday, when he started displaying the same ‘Gifts’ as both his parents. – His Grandmother is a Wiccan, as was his Mother, but she believed herself to old to teach him by herself. • He’s small at only 5’3, slim and baby faced with lightly tanned skin, curly mouse brown hair and ice blue eyes. With a lop-sided smile, and a scar under his right eye from the night in which his parents died. • He’s quiet and shy, and doesn’t really talk to those outside of his social circle. He’s good friends with the twins, Riker and Rydel, and he likes to hang around with Iris and the girls, because they don’t pick on him for being small. He likes Alice when she arrives, because he sees them as being the same, though he feels sorry that she had to grow up not knowing who she was, and without anyone there – This in turn makes him appreciate his Grandmother more. • Griffin gives him the creeps; He gets bad vibes being around him. • He is descendant from a line of Wiccan’s, and so can use forms of magic and invoke the spirits; though not powerful one’s. His father – a French/Canadian Marine - had the ‘Gift’ of sensory location, meaning if given time, he can find anyone or anything anywhere, only however, if he knows exactly who or what it is he is looking for. Angel Louis Sanchez (Nicknamed St. Angel) – 18 • Angel, otherwise known as St. Angel, arrived at the Home only a year prior to the beginning of the story. After being bitten by a Were-shifter during the summer at his home, in Mexico. His parent’s do not know what exactly what he is, but know that he is not their same little boy anymore; and his two brothers, Marcus 12 and Santeo 16 are afraid of him. • He’s 6’6, very tanned and well built with broad shoulders, has a shaven head, and velvety black eyes. He has long deep scars across his chest and for-arms. • Despite the recent events and his becoming a supernatural creature, Angel still remains a happy and cheerful person. He considers himself a Pacifist, but has a feeling that his ‘Love thy neighbor’ and ‘let’s talk it out’ approach may have to change soon; though he is very much the peace keeper among those at the Home. He takes Alice under his wing in the first few days of her arriving, as he too was knew to the world not long before. • He’s good friends with Eloise, and likes to look after many of the younger residents of the Home. • He spends a lot of his free time fixing up cars at the mechanics in the Village, and has built up his own truck over the course of the year. Wicca is a specific Neopagan religion. Its adherents are referred to as Wiccans, though the terms Witches or Crafters are also used along with "witch cult" and "witchcraft," and its adherents "the Wicca."From the 1960s onward, the name of the religion was normalized to "Wicca. It also involves the ritual practice of magic, largely influenced by the ceremonial magic of previous centuries, often in conjunction with a broad code of morality known as the Wiccan Rede, although this is not adhered to by all Witches. Wicca has been around for over a hundred and fifty years, though has not always been referred to as such... This is for those that say I do not know what I am talking about.

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Wicca has NOT been around for 150 years... you are seriously, seriously mistaken. There is no evidence that pre-dates Gardner... Gardner himself admitted that the bit of info he had on the "Old Religion" was fragmentary and most was added by him and Doreen Valiente; and the Margaret Murray theories he bought into were completely debunked by the 1970s. Wiccans may practice magic, but spells are not the focus, and we certainly don't have powers-- and it certainly isn't a bloodline. You are a victim of shoddy scholarship, you need to find more accurate sources. Try reading "Triumph of the Moon" by Ronald Hutton, a Pagan professor and respected historian. Wicca is a minority religion; it is misunderstood enough (you're a perfect example) and has already been twisted enough by fantasy fiction authors who exploit the popularity of the word. You really shouldn't use "Wicca" in a story about people with powers and magic. It's disrespectful. Use "Witch" or make up your own word.

Am I depressed? Or just hormonal?
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So for the past little while I haven't been happy, well I have but not truley or completely happy like I used too feel. I guess I should give a little backround so here it goes: When I was in seventh grade my grandfather got pancreatic cancer and died 2 weeks before xmas, and I took it pretty hard. I was still kind of happy but never all the way there. I started eating more and doing less, and I developed an adtitude, the "eff the world, eff you, I'm just going to crawl over here and never move" kind of adtitude. Then in late july of last year I lost my grandmother, this was even more devastating because I was very close too her, and it was a very unexpected death (we were at the lake and chatting 2-3 weeks prior, had gone to san fransisco at the beginning of summer break). I started eating even more and doing less, like I'm trying to fill a void with food and never can. I have gained a steady 20-30 lbs because of this. School has been pretty crappy too. I worry about universety and how much more difficult it will be then and what will I do if I fail and how I would support myself. I often get into heated and near physical fights with my mother, and I usually can't remember for what. I often wish something would come and kill me, whether it be getting hit by a car or someone shooting up my school and I happen to get caught in the crossfire. And I don't know if this helps but I'm 15-16 yrs of age.

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you're going through puberty, of course you're hormonal, but you also have signs of reactional depression. This is depression which is triggered by a large event, in this case, your grandparents deaths. Go see your schools counseller, and if you feel like it may help your doctor. (often they can point you to a good counseller outside of school, or if need be try you on anti-depressants.)

What would you title this book and/or would you be interested in it?
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I've planned out a book that I've started writing. I need a title for it and also, just for kicks, would you be interested in reading something like this? Okay the basic plot is about an elderly man with no family who lives in a very cold, lightly populated town in Northern North Dakota not 20 miles from the Canadian border. He is soon going to be evicted and agrees to let his brother in law help him find a job, which turns out to be an illegal job smuggling immigrants into America. He starts doing it and it pays off well, and we go through an extensive job with him. But on another run, his is pulled over and questioned by police, he narrowly talks his way out of it. His brother in law suggests that now that they have his license plate and know him, he should find a partner for two reasons. 1. To get a different car and 2. To lure away any suspicion he would attract being alone again. Soon, the elderly man meets a young man working in a convenient store and they begin talking. This leads to the conversation of needing a partner and the young man agrees. The rest of the book follows their friendship as it builds as the elderly man realizes how lonely he was without his family. In the last third, their friendship is tested when they deliver some people to a guy who refuses to pay for the immigrants. The young man pulls out a gun and the complete deal goes wrong and he ends up killing the guy they were dealing with, the immigrants and robbing the guy. They have a long verbal argument until the young man forces the elderly man out of his car at gun point. About a month passes, and the elderly man hasn't seen or heard from his friend and hasn't gone to look for more work smuggling. He finally goes to the convenient store where he first met his friend to learn he quit a week prior. The elderly man notices a storm is blowing in and hurries to his brother in law's place to ask for work. Unfortunately, he tells him that there was a great job that paid handsomely but the young man took it. But, the reason it paid so well was because of the incoming storm and it required driving over the iced up lake, which was thinning due to the weather starting to get warmer. The elderly man quickly rushes to get in his car and try to find his friend in the storm. While driving over the lake he starts to see red headlights further ahead. He sighs relief only to realize that the headlights aren't moving and are high in the air. Racing across the lake, the elderly man finds his friend's car at nearly a ninety degree angle sticking out of the lake and he is sitting inside with a bloody airbag exploded in his face. The elderly man is horribly upset before the end of the book jumps two weeks later with him visiting the young man's parents, who the young man said he hadn't had a good relationship with. The elderly man sits and talks with them before getting closure on the death and leaving. That was longer than I planned, but if you took the time to read it, thanks in advance and I'd love to know if you had an idea for a title and what your thoughts were.

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that sounds really good. i would definitely want to read it AND see the movie adaptation starring Clint Eastwood. haha, but no, really, it sounds like a great idea. i have no idea for a title though. maybe name the book the name of the town? or have some kind of symbolism within the book and name it after the symbol