What do you think of these characters?
Question:
I want to write a story based around these characters.
Daniel Patrick "Danny" MacMillan - A 16 year old guy who was born in Scotland, but moved to the U.S. at the age of 2, because his mother needed a better job. His father left right after his mother got pregnant, and went to the U.S. and got another woman pregnant and she had a girl named Alanna. Danny never met her, but does know that she exists. Kam & Rebecca are his best friends. He secretly like Sarah. He sings well, and has a feel for a classic rock/jazz type of music. He's taken piano lessons since age 7. His eyes are bright green and he has dark brown hair. Usually seen wearing just the average shorts & T-shirt. He now resides in Seattle, WA and is enrolled in a performing arts called West Hills School Of The Arts, and is in the competition choir. He speaks both Scottish & English. His dream is to be a professional actor/singer.
Rebecca Hope Evans - A 16 year old girl who originally lived in New York City, and performed in many amateur shows there, but her parents lost their jobs during the recession and she moved to Seattle to live with her grandparents at age 14. She quickly became attached to Danny & Kam. She's secretly in love with Danny. She has blue eyes and black hair. She very rarely sings anything but songs from Broadway. It is her dream to return to NYC and become an actress on Broadway. She is also enrolled in West Hills School Of Performing Arts, and is in the competition choir.
Presley James Logan - A 17 year old guy who is the resident bad boy at West Hills. He has always lived in Seattle, but wants to go to college in Los Angeles to get a recording track. He is half-black/half-white and has black and blonde dreadlocks. He is very popular in the school, and desparately wants to date Sarah, but she likes Danny. His eyes are brown. He is friends with other popular people (not main characters). He's in the competition choir, and usually plays guitar or bass for them.
Sarah Elizabeth Monroe - A 15 year old southern belle born and raised on Nashville, TN. She moved to Seattle when her parents got divorced at the age of 9. She lives with her mother and younger sister, Zoey. Her eyes are blue and her hair is dirty blonde. She likes Danny, but is going out with Samuel (jock). She is the captain of the dance team, and is part of the competition choir at West Hills. She has a hippie-ish style, as in she seldomly wears cardigans, but mostly dresses from Rue 21 or Earthbound Trading Company. She sings very well, and can play acoustic guitar.
Kameron Lee Weaver - He is the 16 year old best friend of Danny & Rebecca. He is an amazing songwriter and singer, and is usually seen with his guitar on his back instead of his textbooks in a backpack. He has a nerdy-style, usually seen wearing skinny jeans, converse, and cardigans. He wears glasses. His eyes are green and his hair is reddish-brown. He is pale. He likes acoustic songs, but is known for being able to sing any kind of music. Lives with Danny, because his parents were killed in a car wreck when he was 10, and since he had been neighbours with Danny for years, so Danny's mom offered for him to stay with them.
Alanna June Reading - Danny's long lost sister, who is 16 years old and lives in Los Angeles. She has fiery red hair (from her dad) and light green eyes just like her brother. She was born just a few days after Danny was, so he is a tiny bit older than her. She sings professionally in L.A. in her father's theater. She really wants to meet Danny, but they don't know where one another live. She can play clarinet in addition to singing. She would be introduced about halfway through the season (I'm working on a trip to Hollywood for the choir).
Who is your favorite character? Mine would have to be.. a tie between Danny and Rebecca. They were my first creations, Lol. Leave comments answering these questions:
Who is YOUR favorite character"
Would you change anything about the characters?
Would you read a story based around these characters?
Answer:
My favorite character is either Danny or Rebecca as well. I can tell you put alot of thought into these characters. They're very well written
A few are a little cliche, and i think it would be better if Sarah thought Danny was just a friend, but later finds out she's in love with him. I think it would be really sad if Rebecca didnt end up with someone, so keep that in mind
I would absolutely read this book. It seems very interesting, a really good read. I've been thinking about writing a performing arts school book as well, and yours is just the thing i would read. Keep it going! you have serious talent, my friend :) HOPE THIS HELPED!
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